I’m bout to be 420 years old by the time of the next update 
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im on your will right?
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of course 10c for each of my 69 kids
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There will be civil war for inheritance
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not my problem anymore i’m dead
Father🥹
i have no son
Sry but I can’t get over the grammar of it and that keeps making me disinterested to continue reading.
Need to point some of that to Author as to what the issue is, since this is a WIP example of finding grammar/writing/pronounce issue should be mentioned.
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I love these types of stories and enjoyed this one in particular. But like many others have said, there are a great deal of grammatical errors throughout the game. Which made reading this somewhat difficult and unpleasant. The story, characters, and world are all there. It’s just that the amount and frequency of errors overshadow the pretty solid story. Good stuff though!
Im pouring my heart and soul into thinking the author is cooking something up
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So when that creepy instructor gut harasses our MC and i have 3 choices when i choose my best friend option the text is missing.
So how are things?
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I know I’m extremely late, bus since the author said that each path would be really long, my guest is that most of the fighter votes are people who wants a path that will bring the most entertainment for the long run before going into the paths they actually want
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I personally doesn’t take issue in that, I am just bummed because it’s less popular because people like fighting scene.
It’s been a while since I read this but, if you pick Medic team there is hint that Geneva Convention doesn’t exist in this world medic is hinted to be priority target in the battlefield, MC doesn’t need to go out seeking out fight the fight will come to them.
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I have to say, I’m loving the current interaction between God and our character. Lol. As soon as he started talking I immediately knew who I was going for haha. I hope thats an option 