Untitled - Hatred and revenge is all I seek(WIP)

In a midst of your happy childhood, your parents died in the middle of it. Monsters, hatred and vengeance is what you seek. You trained your whole life for a mere revenge, will you get it?

Plot With the deaths of your parent, you were scarred and now seek revenge against the monster that have killed your parents. you have lived by yourself, killing monster to live.

After 10 years you are eligible to sign up for A.R.M( Anti Rouge Monsters.) Your starting to doubt your revenge, but its too late to turn back. After applying you were assigned as a Grade B officer, with the goal of getting revenge, others will get in your way, sorcerers and monsters.

Chapter 1- 7.1k Words

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Encountered this

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Try now

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Fixed

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Sounds interesting

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Hmm so good so far, but i want to ask you 1 thing is it gender locked to male? Because i did’nt saw any gender choice or you still not add it?. Overals 8/10

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This is good, cant wait for more!

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Tags say it’s genderlocked male
Story is 7.8/10 for me

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It’s genderlocked

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i don’t find a problem that it is genderlocked

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It’s off to a strong start considering how short it is. But the only thing thing that could make it better is more customisation options like height, body build and length of hair

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I’ll consider it.

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