"You know exactly what she can be like. Such disrespect - to you, especially. It’s about time we find a new head maid. Juryn deserves a prompotion.”
promotion?
The three of you formed a triangle around a large, metal pot which was crowded by three beings your eyes could hardly make sense of.
Despite what it says about your eyes being unable to make sense of them, right afterwards, you are able to identify the creatures in detail and what they are.
#…Ellis.
#Briar.
#Rory.
#Quill.
#Another name.
The first name begins with … while the others do not.
Your name is Quill, your old life forgotten.
I like this part of the stats screen. The impact of losing your old identity really hits you here. 
“’Give me your hand, please’.”
Single and double quotes used together.
Though not a talkative man, you had rarely seen him so still and silent. The tension that had built over the past year seemed to shift to something else rather than disappear.(?)
What’s the question mark (?) doing there?
With that said, you eye the figure in the distance. They have probably spotted you, too. It might look more suspicious to not approach at all.
You turn to Muir and clear your throat.
#“We talk to them, of course.”
“We talk to them.” You speak the words with ease, as though the answer was obvious. “It’ll be difficult to get an idea of how to proceed if we don’t know what’s going on.”
You notice his mouth droop downwards. “And…you’ll do the talking, I take it?”
You shift, feeling slightly awkward at the thought. Cirern had emphasized the importance of first impressions of presentability, but you had never quite grasped it. Neither had Muir.
Perhaps part of you had never wanted to.
#“I guess I can, if you don’t want to…”
“Thank you.” The answer is instant, and you almost glare in response as Muir unloads the burden of conversation onto you. Although you had offered, you had expected at least a little bit of resistance from him.
“So…that’s it, then? You’ll just leave it to me?”
Muir gives you a direct, unamused look. “Yes. You said you would.”
“Yes, but…but I…”
“It’s better if you do it,” he interrupts, and you’re slightly surprised as he places a hand on your shoulder. “You’re good at talking.”
“Is that a joke?”
He does not respond, but you think you see a faint glint in his eyes before he abruptly turns his head.
With that said, you eye the figure in the distance. They have probably spotted you, too. It might look more suspicious to not approach at all.
You turn to Muir and clear your throat.
#“We talk to them, of course.”
The above is a loop I found. You might want to take a look at it.
Once you grow up, you are able to pick some strong stats. However, I don’t think that is reflected in the stats screen, but I would personally prefer that.
Good luck!
these duplicates are driving me crazy haha. I’ve added a variable that should track whether you already got that scene or not now. Hopefully that was the last one!
I really need to stop doing that haha
I just finished writing the relationship part for the scavenger background yesterday and plan to finish that first, then I’ll definitely add something about your chosen stats!