Tower of Babylon (WIP) - Grammar update [03/07/2019]

@Illusiveacorn54 Wow, thanks! That’s a huge confidence boost you just gave me, for now I will focus more on writing the story and when I’m satisfied with it, I shall implement it on the Wip.

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im hooked, i like the way you write, its kinda smooth (imo) and i love the MC already xD (the option for the reaction kinda funny), i like the relationship and the banter between the MC and their sibling (in my case MC and his lil bro), cant wait to see more~
keep up the good work :grin:

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Thanks! The sibling part is based on personal experience :slight_smile:

Hello everyone, just letting you know that I’ve fixed some grammar mistakes in the wip and already updated the demo with those.

Unfortunately, that’s pretty much all there is to it. I have not had the time to add more to the story, since I’m pretty much bottled up with work to the neck!

But in two weeks, I should have time to add more stuff and relax a bit (finger cross).

Anyway, wish you all a great summer and until next time!

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Man… There is a great bug in the very beginning of the prologue. ( Uncaught Error: prologue line 491: invalid character. Choicescript text should be saved in the UTF-8 encoding). #Ana