To the Whistling Winds (WIP) [UPDATED 09/18/2020]

[pixelcerin]

Bubs the story so far is so intriguing! I’m already trying to piece together the information we got to try to figure out what’s connected and what isn’t…

I might’ve had some love at first sight with Alejandro, but I’m pretty certain I will end up romancing all of the characters sooner or later. They all have such distinct yet appealing personalities I can’t wait to get to know them all better and getting to know how they interact with one another as well!

Even the descriptions of the park are so realistic I could visualize every detail perfectly and felt like it was a real place. I mean, overall I’d say I’m a fan of how you describe every detail in the game.

I’m really looking forward to know which direction the story will be taking and reading more of your writing!!

[bubblesodatea]

Oh my gosh thank you so much for you kind words!! (I almost wrote “king words,” but I think that would have applied too.) I’m so glad you liked my writing and my characters - especially Alejandro.

@pixelcerin

I’m a fan of how you describe every detail in the game.

This means a lot to me, really. I get unsure about my descriptors in the park (and trying to keep them unboring is hard, LOL) so I’m glad you felt like you could picture it! Chester Park is the only theme park we can go to these day. :')

[Astericae]

I really love the setting for the story. An amusement park? That’s such a cool and unique idea! The way things and locations are described were very vivid and made me feel like I was there (Man, it would be cool to visit that theme park haha)

All the characters are very cool as well and I’m pretty sure my MC will end up romancing all of them in different playthroughs. Can’t pick faves because I love them all! Though Alejandro I love as a reader because he’s Filipino like me lol.

I’m so excited to see what happens next and learn more about what’s going on! I’m trying to piece things together but man who knows if there’s any red herrings?

[Fay]

You guys should check out the character moodboards on the tumblr btw! So pretty <3

To the Whistling Winds

[bubblesodatea]

Thank you for sharing this for me! I’m also going to update the game’s summary here as well, in a bit.

[bubblesodatea]

Game’s summary updated! All clean and freshly polished. Check it out!

Also, most updates and responses will most likely be taken on Tumblr.

[Neapu]

I’m in love with this

[JBento]

It’s personal “effects”, not affects.

I understand that you’re trying to go for poetic here, but “naught” means “nothing”, not “not”. Also, I can’t figure out what the “it” in The breeze passes, and you think that it might have never been yours to begin with. is referring to. It seems to be referring to the breeze, but there’s no claim of the breeze belonging to you in the first place?

Uh. “Olympus” is three syllables. Did you mean single-word, or am I missing something? Also, there should be no comma between “at least” and “in your opinion.”

THIS IS GOLD!:
(To be fair, though, you’d be pretty embarrassed if you had to tell people you were a vlogger too.)

Sleep break!

EDIT: I AM RISEN!

This should be “complimentary ones”.

“movement from its holder”

I’m invested. I’ll keep following this!

[bubblesodatea]

@Neapu Thank you!

@JBento Thank you so much for your sharp eye! It’s a lot of help. Also, I’m glad you’re enjoying it so far.

[JBento]

I’m officially petitioning you to be able to address Cecilia by “Tiffany” till the end of forever, just to see her face. Also, I want to repeatedly ask her for her vlog web address.