Time Warden (WIP, Update 7/27)

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:: Snickers :: this is what you’ve lead us to

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sigh Fiiiine, I take the blame. It used to be Thicc, but I just put that in there as a joke for myself well writing, I’m just going to remove that option

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Lol eh I dont mind the options I think they are fine :smiley:

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Can we get a shiba inu as a pet in this game

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I had not considered adding a pet…hmm :thinking:

That could be cool :smiley:

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Would a four story galactic horror named Chomps do?

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Can you please add scars to this game And does MC have a healing factor or they heal like normal human

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Normal in the 2800’s is NOT normal in 1563. You will heal from most wounds in a fraction of the time and they usually do not leave scars. That said there will be some points where you can receive a wound so bad it does leave a permanent mark

Also
Tumblr incoming people!!!
succubus-lair.tumblr.com
This will allow me to interact with and reach a wider audience I hope!

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YESSSSS

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Me seeing the topic halfway to closing: “But it is not this day.”

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“Not today Brian”

Ah, I just realized I have been spending all my time using my tumblr! Quick update, Chapter one is almost done, sooooo very close, but…well I get distracted so easily and so…so…oooooo shiiiiiny

That is basically what has been happening lol. Havent given up though.

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Bad author getting distracted by life :: rolls up the newspaper Snickers ::

Lol no worries it happens so easily and I for one looking forward to what you put forth :smiley:

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By the way when you say fiery eyes you mean red or yellow?
And on Fumikos pov there’s errors from him to she and in some parts it says “him stuff”

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I imagine it’s mix of yellow, orange and red

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Hrmm, alrighty, thanks for letting me know

That’s how I imagined it yes.

I have a feeling Chomps got their name because they are a cannibal or just has very big teeth

Chomps is in fact, basically a large mouth with legs. However despite the name and image it evokes, Chomps is a very intelligent being. However they have a slight problem. When they see another living creature they feel an innate need to eat it. This was their original purpose.

They were kept on the Behemoth for their safety and that of others, when spoken with over a radio they are very pleasant and funny.

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