Threads Of Identity: Body Exchange (WIP) / 52k words / Dark Romance, Historical Fiction

Thank you :heart:

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The save system doesn’t work it says error bad slot

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Okay, the problem is fixed.
I apologize for the delay.

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Definitely an interesting concept and i cant wait to see where you take it in regards to MC fitting in the “other world” especially the reactions of others to a completely different personality.

If I’m being honest the grammar didn’t really bother me, I’m TERRIBLE at grammar and I should probably take the advice in this thread to improve it :sweat_smile: I did notice these however, with the nost glaring being the “unknown” (for name I’m assuming)

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Thank you for your support, that was very meaningful for me❤
As for the grammar, I have corrected most of them by now.
And for the errors you have mentioned I will fix them soon, I am really glad you mentioned them since I didn’t take notice until now.

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Its really interesting, I have honestly enjoyed both the story and your pretty way of writing (something i usually don’t see these days ) and I see no grammar mistake perhaps you have fixed everything, so keep it up.
Excited for the next update :blush:.

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Thank you❤

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Cant wait for chapter 1. I want to see the other characters react to a completly different MC.

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Awwww come on!!! It was just starting to get so good… :sweat_smile:

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Interesting story and you have unique way of writing :grin: excited for the next update!!

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Will there be status about strength knowledge charisma etc?

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Of course, I am planning for even more than that, but for now, I just made the status based on the choices we have.
Thank you for sparing your time to pass by :slight_smile:

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I have read your story and I find it very lovely, not only genre or type of story you chose but also the way you wrote it💙

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this story is really interesting! I am looking forward for the next chapter!

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:smiling_face_with_tear:So interesting…waiting fornthe new chap

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I feel like I will kinda miss my stranger😢

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The story sounds very intriguing and i’m so looking forward to read more about it :smiley: I hope you still will continue the story <3

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nice effort.

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Thank you, it makes my day to hear that you appreciate it ( ͡> ‿ ͡<)
Actually, I have the chapter ready but it needs so much reviewing and my college exams aren’t making things manageable ( ͡╥ ‿っ ͡╥)

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Awww, i’m so sorry, please take care of yourself first and foremost and I hope everything will get smooth and well with your college exams, the best of luck <3

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