Thank you, Sophia 
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For those who seek Alyssa as a romance.
For those who seek Clyde as a romance.
Open Me
Haven’t drawn his scene yet lol.
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Just doing my job. 
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…another bug.
sighs
Be right back. I’ll fix it.
Edit: Done. Fixed it. Probably…
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Really? No joke? (20 excited characters)
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Sees picture
Glances upward
Puts picture on the table
Leans back into the chair
I’m beginning to see a pattern here my liege, it seems every RO with some variation of -Lissa on their name are the best RO out of the bunch. There’s Alissa (not actually an RO but seems to be one of the most decent people in the setting), Melissa and now there’s Alyssa…
Sips tea
And what’s this thing called meer tea? Mersee? Mercy? That you’re giving to the populace? I thought their continued suffering is a crucial part in maintaining your divine empire?
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I will die from anxiety before it comes. Also, I actually feel kinda bad for sabotaging Clyde. Kinda. Just a bit. Not really.
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First of all, this character is based from my cousin, but I named her after my dear friend, Alyssa, since my cousin’s name doesn’t fit well. I’m not the type of person who has “patterns” lol.
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I love the small scene of directly asking the chief for his daughter’s hand. It made the refusal a lot more worth it to me. 
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Typos and crap
As the shard of glass slashes your flesh, mild amethyst liquid pops from your skin and cover the wound on your hand.
covers
A drop of blood slips on your hand and touched the floor.
touches
It didn’t long take a long time and he finally notices you.
O.o I dont think that’s supposed to be there
She smiles as she sees Clyde and her smile even grew brighter when she sees you with him.
grew even
Did something happened to you?"
“What?” Clyde confusedly says. “What do you mean by that?”
happen
What happened happened to my overly confident and rebellious friend who always happens to have a smart ass response?"
Clyde watches you intensely without saying a word.
sniffs I smell envy👃
You remember how rowdy Clyde was and how he always get injured by the fights he gets into.
got or used to get
I’m about to sabotage my bff’s plan to propose to the love of my life… So needless to say if you’re planning to steal her away just know that great sacrifices have been made 
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If possible I’ll rather lose her then my brother. But she says she thinks of him as brother. Did you really had to screw the only relation he has? Good game but
When will the MC get outed?
Better yet, what will Allie do when that happens?
(seeing as she’s big on traditions I think she’ll take it way harder than Clyde)
@Sophia: I’ve found several more substantial issues, together with a handful of more minor English language ones.
More substantial issues:
Men will now start working on the fields rather than playing fence with other children,
Okay, so “playing fence” should be “fencing”, but more importantly, I already have a job… 
Am I supposed to give up my high paying (
) job to go work in the field simply because I’m a “man” now?
Despite of that, he doesn’t do nor say anything.
“So that’s how you want to play?” Clyde smirks - that’s never a good sign. He cracks his hands, approaches you with a grin on his face, and starts to run towards you.
He literally just says and then does something… 
Why the hell are the two of you naked?
Has she never seen us swimming before?
Alyssa removes the clothe covering the basket and reveals the delicious wonders in it.
“Cloth”, but didn’t she just give it to Clyde?
“Festival?” you ask, failing to remember any sort of announcement. “When was that announced?”
Wouldn’t festivals just be at the same time every year?
Agreeing to help Clyde:
You like Clyde, but your friendship with him is too important to lose.
“Like” can often be used in place of “love”, but in this case, I feel it doesn’t really work, as it overlaps too much with the non-romantic meaning of “like”.
Trying the “Decline” route, I lose 10 and 5 points with Clyde. Is this intentional, and if so why not just deduct 15 at once?
You can ask for her hand!
Given that I’ve showed no interest in Alyssa, this is completely out of nowhere…
Honestly, there are a lot of English language errors here; I don’t really have time to list every single one, but I think I found most of the ones from the prologue:
Their lives were a bliss.
Just “Their lives were bliss.”
One fine day, ships arrived at the west of Argia.
Best to remove “fine”, as it sounds a little colloquial.
To their horror, the bloods they had were nonexistent to their offspring.
This needs a bit of rephrasing… At the very least “to” should be “in”, but it could probably be improved more.
It created a new color, which they would later identify as “Lavens.”
I thought “Lavens” were the people, not the colour?
“Inherit thy blood,” a common phrase which was originated in the old ages when the Lavens were born.
This doesn’t really mean anything… Red and Blue Bloods inherit their blood colours too…
While the Blue Bloods lived on the southern lands, Cerlean, where most of the diamonds are.
I’d suggest replacing “diamonds” with something like “mineral wealth”. 
(Okay, so it’s not a “error” per se, but it makes me think too much about the economical situation on the island, and that just leads to me asking myself more and more questions, such as about the presence of trade with other nations, the presence of mercenaries, how such things make sense when the races are very clearly delineated, and so on… )
It is the very reason of their military power.
Should be “for”.
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Can’t wait for the other RO’s but right now I don’t mind being Clyde’s wing-man
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I never get tired of playing this. I’m gonna buy it when it comes out! Excited for more!!!
" You hug him, holding back your tongue from telling him that you like her. A sudden jolt of pain comes to your heart. Jealousy? Is this what it feels like? You don’t know. Your chest just hurts in a way you’ve never felt before. You like Alyssa, but your friendship with him is too important to lose." "
Eeeeekkk!!! That was Awesomely sweet!! <3 <3 <3 :3
Will there be sequels to this story??! =D
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Thank you~~~ Forgive me if I can’t update it more often. I have art commissions and they’re taking all my time.
Sadly, no, but I would have other projects in the future that may interest you. 
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No worries!! Totally understandable. Life comes first!! 
Awwhhh, hmm… Ok, I guess I can forgive you then =P
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