Pleasantly suprised by the amount of choice selections we get 
I got some feedback to actually include more to help people feel more connected to the story, so there will be more to enjoy!
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Chapter two time!
“meant” at the start of the highlighted text, “the” at the end
Real-life intruding so I need to stop for a few hours, but I just reached the point of the first romance choice, and I like that you split the romance approaches. I’m not sure about the icons (they might not be sufficiently indicative of the approach), but that might just be a case of me needing to get used to them, and in any case there’s always the stats screen.
If the icons aren’t clear enough, I can definitely go back in and add brackets with labels like [direct], [sensitive], etc.
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Eh, they’re sufficiently distinct from each other that they can’t be confused, so it’s just a matter of getting the hang of them, and one can always check the stat screen. Besides, icons are more charming than brackets. 
Crime and romance? I’m in!
There’s plenty of both! Glad to have you!
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