I fell such a Pearl vibe from Rosa XD
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This was awesome!! I may or may not have read it during class 
but seriously this is AMAZING 
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Pearl from SU? I haven’t watched SU but that’s the only Pearl I know 
Thank you! I won’t be a hypocrite and tell you to pay attention in class because I rarely paid attention in class lmaooo
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UPDATE JAN. 16 2021
This is the latter part of Chapter 2! I edited some scenes in the previous updates here and there as I was trying to getting into the story to write this, so there will be new choices. The demo now stands at 60k words without code, 67k with, and 35k words on average per playthrough and that’s just chapter 2?
Still not fully written the stat gains/losses and this particular part is a bit weird with the relationship stats too (only because I’m planning to edit tomorrow if there are suggestions and/or errors and I’m now sleepy), but I’m planning to maybe just use the stats that I, at the moment, think are very useful (the godly stats, the wit, deceit, and willpower stats) and basically not use the ones I’m not sure of yet.
A disclaimer: this is a pretty rough draft. I figure out my story as I write so some (many) of these might change. I don’t have anyone read before I post here so, as you can imagine, the quality will be pretty low. I edit past chapters every time I can. I also list down suggestions from readers and try to add them in the game if I think they fit it.
You are allowed to be a pretty bad guy here but I’m used to writing linear books so I only add the choices to be mean/stoic another time, since I have to get into the writing mood for that too. I will add them as the story progresses, don’t worry. Will also add some more personality choices as the story goes and I figure out how I’d deal with it. (Oh, if you have some suggestions on how to be mean, tell me!)
As usual, tell me if there are errors of any kind (bugs, wrong customization, events happening that’s not related to your gameplay) or if you have any suggestions!
Oh, and I made a Ko-Fi!
Link is below the google forms. I now take commissions to help pay for stuff I need but can’t ask my parents for, and I also will appreciate it if you simply buy me a coffee. Right now I’m trying to earn some money for a PC/laptop because, I’m not even kidding nor exaggerating, I’ve duct taped my laptop case together because it’s broken, and it freezes when I have more than ten/fifteen tabs open, which is sort of important for when I’m writing while looking at references.
If you like my writing, please consider buying me a coffee or commissioning a written piece!
I’m back to studying (and, if you’re following my tumblr, you probably know about the unfortunate events that happened to me last month/year) so my tumblr updates are now very rare, trying to get back to it, though. I’ve given myself a goal of 2000-3000 words per day written for this game and hopefully I get to actually commit to it.
Uhhhh, I don’t think there’s much else to say. Happy reading, and I hope you’re having a great day!
OH. What kinds of breakfast do you guys think I should add to the breakfast choice? I ran out of breakfast ideas because I usually either eat leftover food or not eat at all. Reply here, send me an ask through tumblr, or answer through the misc part of the google forms!
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The Rosy Ones is back!
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When it comes to breakfast options, it depends on where in the world you’re from, as much as what you’d prefer.
Some US options are: your standard eggs, pancakes and bacon and-or sausage platter; a bowl of cereal/oatmeal with fresh fruit, and toast or some type of muffins, maybe even yogurt on the side.
If you’re from the UK: you’d want bready things like bagels, English muffins, toast again, along with warm, fresh beans, British style bacon, sausage links, and naturally some jam to spread on your bready thing.
From the far side of the planet in Japan: a bowl of rice, some grilled fish, and a type of pickled veggie like turnips for example. But that’s only if you prefer something more traditional.
Those are examples of breakfast foods that I know off the top of my head, but others likely know more. 
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Ahhh! It is so exciting to see an update for TRO’s! Thank you for posting it up. I’ve played through this a few times now and every time I find myself loving Elijah so much. I pray Zeus that he isn’t evil 
Great world building! And I really appreciate the amount of branching you have done to let us assemble a main character and their relationships, I really like my MC charming and sarcastic.
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Oh, thank you for these! I wanted to add more non western breakfast meals but I couldn’t think of that many so I figured I’d ask instead. I’m Asian and my usual breakfast, when I do get to eat breakfast, is rice with some sausages, or nuggets, or canned goods. A piece of bread here and there, too. And of course the coffee.
hopefully he isn’t 
Thank you! I’m slowly getting more used to writing IF, and I’m struggling with writing the MC because I’m either trying to make them sound as personality-less as possible to give way for how the readers might want to imagine them as, which is… it’s horrible–writing dull characters is horrible, or giving them a personality the readers might not like/does not agree with the personality the readers have picked. I think I’m going to try to go the Wayhaven way and have personality stats, that might be better in the long run. Hopefully as the story progresses and as I go through the drafting processes, there will be more customization options for personalities and relationships!
Yes! 2020 was not kind to me, and I’m pretty sure it was a bitch to most of everyone else, but I’m really hoping this year’s better and I can focus more on writing. Hopefully my studies doesn’t interfere with it too much, I really want to finish at least one draft this year.
Sorry for making you all wait 
I hope 2021 is much kinder to us all.
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It’s soooo good so far, can’t wait to find out what kind of creature or creatures I can be.
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This is very interesting!! I’ll probably play again a few times when I can but it’s very very good so far.
All the characters are amazing and I can’t wait to find out more about the mother and the other gods/goddesses.
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I just finished reading this and it is very good. I don’t know if this was brought up yet. When I was on the plane Elijah said I was stronger than them and would win. Then when later after the unknown text I said I felt punchy and they told me that my hand would shatter.
Unless I missed something.
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Ahhhh thank you! As of now, the plan is to let MC be either: angel, demon, fae, elf, siren, or mermaid. These are always subject to change. The scene will probably be a few chapters away.
Thank you so much!
Thank you! And oh, yeah. Elijah was mostly assuming a lot of things about the mc from what he knows about their background–in which case, if he’s right, he will lose a fight against them. In the Lucas scene, it’s still true because MC is still very much breakable, and punching an Angel Guard will be like punching pure, hard metal. These are mostly throwaway lines that’ll make more sense in future updates! But if I can find a better way to still put them there without it looking like contradicting statements. Thank you for pointing that out!
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All those races sound fun! 
I did think of one race that might be cool given the Greek theme, a Cerberus shifter. Idk turning into a giant three headed dog would be unique and weird. Lol I looove the story so far though definitely one of my favorite WIPs.
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Just read the book, didn’t think I would like it when I first started but was pleasantly surprised. Also, hopefully you can learn necromancy. I was like necromancy. I’m assuming your sweet mates are arroz?
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There will be some Chaos Magic learning, but I’m not sure how far into the book or series it will be yet. And thank you, I’m glad you liked it!
Oh, that sounds cool! Unfortunately I made the creatures as those from the most ancient nations for plot purposes. And thank you!
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Really awesome story! Very creative and unique, am really curious about what’s going to happen next and the diversity of awesome characters is really cool!
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I must say this is well written.
Quite immersive and diverse, too. Every detail of the environment is understandable can imagine it crystal clear and psychological effect from childhood gave quite an impact.
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Good start.
Poor mc though, for a major heir they sure have been left out of the loop an awful lot.
Now as for the boys I can’t decide between River and Chai…any chance for the mc to end up in bed with both of them somehow?
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Why do I get the feeling, the angry woman, unfortunately I forgot her name off the top of my head right now, it’s some sort of demon type thing? With a fire and all that. The one who talk to you about necromancy, which I kind of hope she can actually teach us, because yay necromancy, I’m going to assume it’s some sort of dragon, since she kind of sort of admits as much or the dialogue when you come out with the dragon guy, anyway. Like the web, looking forward to next update. I always like
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Thank you! Glad y’all liked it!
There will be an open relationship option!
There will be some Chaos magic learning in the book! May be introduced chapter 3 or 4!
And unfortunately, I don’t understand which woman you’re talking about? Is it Kali? She’s, I think the only one who spoke about necromancy. Do you mean you think she’s a demon/dragon? She’s a witch/sorceress who has too many secrets and abilities so people don’t believe her. Or is it Zakia (fire and angry), in which case she’s an Arae, which is a spirit of curses and she works for the Underworld! If it’s someone else entirely, let me know because these are the only two I can think of with a half sleeping brain.
And thank you! I’m glad you liked it!
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