I definitely will! 
my MC will turn the flirting into a chaotic competition if that’s possible.
Ah, well, maybe a little bit. But you have to suck it up cause they’ll have more appearances later. I assure you… they’re probably not going to harm you…
Oh my god, that’s entirely possible of course. He’ll just have to try harder because, while he’s cool and charming, he sometimes gets flustered when people fight back. Careful, though, he’s competitive. 
Also, good luck to your suitemates. I imagine Zakia will lose her temper quickly, but the others will probably have a bet going on about it.
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Question : what supernatural humanoid creatures do you suggest I add to the species you will be able to play as? I have some in mind but I find them to be quite… common. Would be better if they don’t coincide with the ROs’ species
I recommend an angel, because not only they’re common to the afterlife, but also they’re aliens.
And Quick question: Is there going to be an hierarch in that world?
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I do plan on adding angels and demons, I think others might find them too common but I really like them, lol. Thank you for the suggestion!
Do you mean someone other than the gods? I’m thinking of a city mayor, actually, and all those under them in the government. So, both clouds will still have their own city governments and the gods are sort of the nation’s, if that makes sense.
Do you mean someone other than the gods? I’m thinking of a city mayor, actually, and all those under them in the government. So, both clouds will still have their own city governments and the gods are sort of the nation’s, if that makes sense.
How about proprietors/Merchants?
The city will be like a normal city on Earth, except it’s much larger and divided into three sections, and on a cloud. So, if you mean are there going to be businesses, there will be! In fact, the player’s mother is the CEO of the leading tech corporation and it has a branch on Rodinos. Please correct me if I misinterpreted your question!
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In fact, the player’s mother is the CEO of the leading tech corporation and it has a branch on Rodinos
Based on experiences from what I learned by playing Civilization games, Is that investing in technology is always the best course of action.
Especially once your mother inevitably discovers gunpowder, You bet there’ll be magically enhanced automatic flintlock machine guns: Remember, the Gods gave us fire. But blowing sh*t up? It’s our idea.
This is great.
Oh, gunpowder already exists. But the company is huge and there are lots of secret stuff going on that the player doesn’t know about. Lots of it magically induced weapons sold to power hungry mortals who cared little for what made a weapon so powerful. The company won’t be that important in book 1 but its secrets will come up some time.
Thank you so much!
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Oooooohhhh this WIP sure looks promising 
I really like the writing, and man, the Guardians I just… love them and how creepy they are. I can’t wait to see more of it, keep up the good work! 
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Oh no, I cannot believe you just made me emotional with a couple of pages ಥ_ಥ
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OH I LOVE THIS. That cliffhanger on the end was so good, really excited to see how you continue this!
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Oh my, seems like I’ve already found my favorite RO. Arrogant and charming? Yeah that’s my type. Or I’m actually just a big dragon nerd and I’m so glad I can romance a dragon shapeshifter. Hmm, so he’s hard to romance? I’ll take that as a challenge
Anyway, I found a few typos.
Summary
Species*
You’re talking about her gaze, right? If so, it should be it looked soft.
Remove you
every meal time*
or change the sentence to
every time it was meal time*
Demo was amazing, I’m really looking forward to the next update! I’m definitely bookmarking this.
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Ahh! Thank you so much. Didn’t expect people to love the Guardians so much but they do, and I love it.
You don’t understand how happy this made me. 
Thank you? Would that be appropriate to say, lmao.
Thank you so much! I’m really excited to see how it goes too, since things don’t always go as I planned when I write.
The way I see it, you just found three reasons to romance him. He’s your type, he’s a dragon shapeshifter, and he’s a challenge. 
Thank you! Surprised there isn’t a whole lot more since I just quicktested without reading through the code 
I’ll get to correcting them!
Thank you, that means so much to me!
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Yeah, I’m sorry. The stats page is just there as placeholder at the moment, stuff I copied from my very first try. I’ll try to get that sorted out but since it’s not important to the prologue yet, it’s not a priority. I’ll get to it while or after writing the first chapter, though. Thank you for pointing it out!
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Omg I have to bookmark this. It ticks everything I need in a book. Also, that cliffhanger…wheres home 
+1 to having kirin as a pet and if you’re not limiting it to greek mythology then maybe a cute kitsune or a pixiu.
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It’s only the demo and I already know it’s going to be a hit sidueebneehwhwjw
Kitsune or a phenoix :3
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Romance a charming half-dragon you say? I’m in!
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Oh my god, thank youuu! Also, home is Rodinos 
although mc doesn’t know/remember ever being there.
Ohh, I love all these! I probably should add up there that the pets will one way or another help you in some battles. These fit that! I’ll add them to the poll! Thank you so much! (And no, I’m not limiting it to greek myth).
You have no idea how happy this made me! Thank you!!! 
I’ll definitely add kitsune to the poll! As for phenoix, is that phoenix or is it something else? Sorry, nothing shows up when I search it but phoenix, which I’m planning to make into a creature you can play as. Thank you for the suggestions!
Ah, there seems to be a favorite RO already. 
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