You know me too well.
looking forward to updates!
I can tell the story is going to be good and I like the setting a lot, but the writing lacks flow; it sounds really choppy and short when I’m reading it. Try to add details and emotions and get it to flow smoothly 
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I don’t think the “[b/]” part is supposed to be there
First day training princess and some quite eventful dinner is boring day?
Also, might I ask who is Aaron?(did I get the name right?)
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@Vattena He is explained in the first post:
They also have the other family members in the first post. My question about this is; can we raise our stats?
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