What are the MP pretty much as an organization group what I’m really trying to say is who is their boss am I going to hate or love
And just for you because you wanted something long why can’t night Hunter can’t see his own friend because they’re both covered in Black and dead of night( I know that bad joke someone get me a lawyer I am just that terrible)
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lol you should really be punished for that…
Lol this is so terrible I like it… 
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Do I really have to answer this?
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I don’t even understand the joke ( if it good enough to be called a joke )
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Lol @Varyn_Ashyver_closed, @Manaxaggd
Why can’t the night hunter see his friend? (a fellow night hunter probably)
This is the joke (as far as I understood) and the answer is…
Cause they’re both covered in black (from head to toe wore black) in the dead of the night (it’s pitch black night?)
Lol highly experienced with my twin and one of my twin girls speaking jumbled incoherent most times 
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You’re lucky that you didn’t get dirty jokes I was being merciful because I have a full f****** book no not joking I do have a book dirty jokes PS I know it was a bad joke that’s why I created it I just need someone to make it complete so I got to say thank you to Empress nightmare for making it whole God damn it I’m playing too much Dead Space
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Wouldn’t you want to ware, dark blue, not black? Isn’t the night, actually dark blue, we just see it is black cause of human bio or what ever?
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Does the demo and, when you find Bones of the top of the stairs? Just from some of the comments, I’m not sure.
Nope…the demo will have at least 10 chapters
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Apologies, what I meant by my last post was, does the demo and as of now, at the stated scene.
*end 
To reiterate my question, since I’m not sure what the previous post was supposed to indicate. Does the current demo and, right after you lock in your romance, with the page underline break: someone has broken into your room.?
I am asking because one, I have seen a couple comments that seem to indicate that there is more to the demo, and two, I am aware that, occasionally if you load an old safe, it messes with things a little bit. I loaded an old save, that sent you to the most recent chapter.
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Ooh I got it @Varyn_Ashyver_closed what @ArchivistAlpha096 means is the current demo ends with the dog (bones) sitting outside MCs room and the door open and MC realising that someone broke in to their room?!?
Cause Righter has seen comments that indicate that there is a bit more after that scene…
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I believe Righter got confused by the ending. The current ending as far as I can tell with new saves, ends at the part with the dog and the protagonist arriving at their room finding it to have been broken in.
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That’s it but @ArchivistAlpha096 seems to have seen some comments that says there’s more…
I’m really liking this so far. I especially like how you managed to include a save system. The amount of times I’ve had to reset these games after screwing up is insane. One thing I’d recommend is more hair options. I personally envisioned a character with rather messy hair.
The writing is very good so far (I’m in the beginning atm) but I did notice some oddities on this bit here. Keep in mind this could be a dialect thing. It’s when the family is eating breakfast (anyone know how to submit pictures? it won’t let me embed them).
I’m not entirely sure that this is the best time to tell us about the father’s missing leg. Maybe add a sentence where he reaches for a cane or something. The only other bit I wanted to mention was “the wall war 2”. If that’s the name of a conflict, “wall war” should be capitalized. The only other issue is that usually (at least where I live), if a conflict is numbered (only example I can think of is World War 2) usually there isn’t a “the” in front of it. Not sure why, I think it’s just how titles are said. Kind of like how it’s “Star Wars” and not “the Star Wars”. If it’s different where you live, then never mind.
I’ll be playing the demo over the course of a day or so, so more feedback is pending.
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Yeah, that’s where the demo ends.
For now.
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I do the same, but it keeps saying I can’t embed media.
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The amount of times I want to bang my head against the wall when I was flirting with Alice only for nothing to happen is uncountable. And when I thought that the romance is gonna start since I’ve been given a choice, it just had to be THE END of the chapter…
Why am I so weak to romance?
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