like a video game getting stuck. you type /stuck and the game usually deletes you and respawns you away from where you are so you are “unstuck”. I was implying you should hack reality.
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Maybe you could put the Mother/Child moments in the beginning since I believe that’s when children are the most impressionable and more willing to satisfy their parent more so they can love them. Vera could try to instill her pathos or ideology and every time the child shows progress she gives he/she an award secretly in graining her knowledge. Schooling why her rival is horrible to her which thrives the child to want to protect her and help. Amongst other things too on how the world work in her POV.
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Thanks for the suggestions. I’ll see what I can do.
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Not a problem. Glad to help out with a story I extremely like. Good luck with the progress.
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I want this to be a thing so badly
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Hey everyone. Apologies for the slow progress. Been hitting a dead wall for a while. I made a tumblr blog specifically for this wip to keep in communication with everyone. Link is in the first post. 
Edit:maybe it’s because I’m on a phone but the link acts funny with me. Let me know if it gives you any trouble. Good day/night.
Edit 2: ok so what was bothering me is no longer there. Please let me know if the link works for you too. Apologies for any inconvenience the link may have caused.
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Wow, that’s an unexpected plot. I don’t think I’ve ever seen anything like that before.
I’ve enjoyed it a lot, but it was waaay too short for me to give an actual feedback.
And now I’ll go mad waiting for the next update 
Seriously, that cliff hanger…
My character is so going to escape Vera’s control…
Anyway, good luck with the project! It’s great!
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This has interesting premise. Can’t wait to see how it would turn out.
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I’m looking forward for the next update. This seems so good! I’ll befriend the hero or make him my rival at the very least. I like Vera’s attitude though… Huh, what side am I gonna join here??
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NOOOOO!!! Right as I was getting into it, it ended! 
I love the concept, this game is going to be amazing!
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very fun game! can’t wait for more 
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The story that makes me wish for more lol 
i love it! the concept is intriguing, and vera is such an interesting character. i also like how you set up her and mc’s relationship i’ll make you proud, mother 
, and i’m very curious as to how mega-man would react once he finds the mc hehehe…
in any case, this is such a fun read and i’m excited for this!
Is Vera or Mega-Man a RO?
not sure about vera, but mega man isthe hero your mc is cloned from so probably not?
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Can’t romance mega man be incest haha and Vera doubt it she probably just want to do her own goals
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Wes has mentioned that there’s no ROs in this thread. Sorry everyone.
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Reading the first part I was all “hell yeah I’m this universe super man 
and then I read the next part and I kinda deflated ” lol but honestly it sounds amazing, about to check it out.
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It’s interesting so far! Looking forward to the rest of the story
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Is Mega Man related in any way, shape, or form to the super fighting robot from Capcom?