The Horizon One mission ended in disaster. A failed mission, six dead crew members, and no answers. What was meant to be a pioneering voyage to establish a permanent lunar colony and a stepping stone out into the solar system has now become the greatest spacefaring disaster of the 21st century. The world needs answers. It needs to bury and mourn the bold astronauts who lost their lives for the sake of exploration. It needs more explorers willing to take up the torch and persevere despite the danger.
The world needs you.
As Mission Commander of Horizon Two, your job is straightforward, but anything but simple: establish the lunar colony, and uncover the mystery of what happened to the Horizon One crew. It will be no easy task. It will require intelligence, grit, determination, creativity, courage, and cooperation. You are an astronaut though, years of training and professional knowhow give you the tools to lead a successful mission.
There are some things however, that lurk in the pitch-black shadows of the lunar landscape that no amount of training could ever prepare you for…
Summary
Hey everyone! The Horizon Incident has been a project I’ve been working on for a little while and feel like I’m ready to share what I have so far. The first two (of likely four) parts are finished. This story is something of a love letter to space travel and novels/movies like Apollo 13, The Right Stuff, and The Martian. It spawned from the question of “What happens when incredibly well-trained and professional individuals encounter something completely unexplainable?”
You play as the commander of an international mission sent to investigate the mysterious circumstances that led to the deaths of six crew members on an earlier mission. Circumstances quickly change however, and what was once an investigation quickly turns into a desperate attempt to keep yourself and your crew alive.
Features
-Play as male, female, or non-binary
-Specialize in various mission critical skills
-Gain or lose the respect of your crew based on decisions
-Uncover the mystery of Horizon One bit by bit
-Manage your stress to ensure your effectiveness
-Various levels of success. Save yourself, save your whole crew, and everything in between (WIP)
-Prove that you’ve got The Right Stuff
Feedback
I’m looking for all sorts of feedback. Whether it be something as simple as spelling errors (I’ve done a few read throughs but I’m sure there’s still plenty of minor errors I just missed), coding mistakes, opinions on the characters, opinions on the narrative, or suggestions about the plot so far and things you’d like to see going forward.
Length
Currently I’ve finished the first two parts out of a planned four parts. The word count sits around 60,000 or so, and I expect the final product to end up around 120,000-150,000 words, but I’m usually quite bad at determining how large or small these projects end up being. I recently have come into a fair bit of free time so hopefully I can throw myself fully into this project and make good progress in the coming weeks and months.
Thank you so much for taking the time to read this and give your feedback it means a lot! I’d recommend reading in dark mode for the sake of ambience. Regardless though, thanks again and I hope you enjoy!
Playlink: The Horizon Incident