The Graves of Heirs (WIP) [Updated: October 29, 2021]

Okay then! I could play it now!

And wow, the general ambience of this chapter is grim, but at the same time really interesting!
Though I will admit at this point my main wish is to ask the Revenant to make MC’s hair regrow :rofl:

Now that MC was able to interact with more people, it was nice to see the array of answers one could give in each circumstances. That allows a lot of customization of MC’s personality.
I especially like the fact “passion” is not necessarily about screaming and swearing and being agitated. My MC is really leaning on the passion side, but most of the time, it’s a fire burning and raging inside, while he keeps his calm and stays level-headed in his actions. That is really extremely cool.

Also Astasus… such a sweetheart! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:
I didn’t expect him to be SO DAMN SWEET!
Now, I won’t lie, I’m also already extremely attached to the Revenant. Waaay too much, I think…
I wouldn’t be suprised if my MC went ballistic if something happened to him… which isn’t really the smartest thing, considering having him exorcised would save MC’s soul :rofl:
I’m really curious as to how their relationship will evolve in the future, really.

Now, as for my reports etc…
Honestly, the main things I had to say are the ones I’ve put in my previous post, about the RNG and MC’s world. I guess I was too absorbed into the story to notice much!

The one thing I've noticed, while changing, once at schoool:

The first option in the choice, when looking at the mirror, says “Just checking. I’m still a {race}”, instead of the actual race.

I may have missed other typos or coding errors, as I said, but in this chapter so far, nothing bothered me or anything, so I don’t have much to add, since I already said the positive :laughing:

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