UPDATED: I changed the game!
EDIT: I missed any important things. Now you can play!
What? What does that even mean?
And what do you mean?
If you mean “missing any important things”, so I forgot to add the codes.
Or if you mean “No updates, no feedback”, so nobody gives any feedback to me.
Setting skills based on races or parents seems dumb.
Id rather suggest doing it throught short childhood sequence IMHO
You seriously need to have one of more experienced writers to go throught your game. You have a load of things that i think arent lets just say very good. I dont want to depress you its just. This is your first time writing anything right ?
Also why you speaking in third person
I try to write about the childhood, thanks you for your tips.
No, I released my stories in the net. It is not my first game either. Like I wrote, I am very bad in grammars, so I need help.
Hmm? What?
He’s talking in “third person” because English isn’t his main language and he is learning.
Also Jacob, I could help you with Grammar and editing.
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Yes, please! I really need your help!
Will I paste the text or send my e-mail in your message?
Just send me what you think needs to be fixed with Grammar.
I’ll PM you my email, if you want just send some text and I’ll fix it up as best I can.
Grammar is not a proper noun. It should be written in lowercase.
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