@Lycoris splendid 
OH great wip author! 
Interesting… Would these traits be categorised?
Like some lack something, physically or supernaturally. like the ribcage
A physical abnormality. (maybe claws for hands, razor teeth, strangely coloured irises etc.)
Have a unique feature or talent. bleeding literally everywhere sounds… Unique.
Well, the first part is kind of… philosophical, but I will work on it.
@GloriaRose thank you! 
@Nathan_Faxon that’s… spoiler! You will discover it lateeeeer on, but I can say, kind of
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Well if you need any ideas for traits. I have a bank full of them, some of them are incredibly bizarre, some are downright terrifying and the rest are comical. I like comical. 
Oh, thanks for offering! I would love to hear them! 
Prepare your PM
It’s always ready
I know it says it after, I just had no idea what I was covering. My head, my hair, my feet?
Mmmm… I thought it was clear enough when it says it’s because of the light (because you are dazzled), but I will try to make it clearer 
I’m sorry. I felt like I’d be cowering down, covering my head, thus my hair. Great story though.
This is great. Such an interesting place to set the story. I love the feeling of paranoia I have throughout, never knowing who to trust.
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Seems interesting so far can’t wait to play more
This was wonderful! I loved it so much. That atmosphere was 
Dagger seems interesting, and the brief mentions of the ringmasters were intriguing. My only gripe, except for the few grammar things, was in the character creation. Maybe make it a bit more apparent what you’re choosing? Like when I had the option to choose my eye color I had no idea what all these colors were for at first, haha.
Can’t wait to see more from you! 
I’m glad you liked it!
I have to work on the grammar, I know, but it’s a tad hard when people just tell me there are mistakes instead of pointing them out, it’s like searching a needle in a haystack because my mother language isn’t English 
And I have to work on the character creation, too.
@Harley_Robin_Evans thank you!
I have a soft spot for dark games, and this one is right up my alley so far. I look forward to seeing it develop.
Thanks! I was a tad worried because I didn’t feel like it was dark enough but it’s the beginning: I still have a lot of room to get it to the +18 rate
@Lycoris I belive you will do just Great! 
18 plus here i Come! (When it happens Ahem!^^)
But the +18 is for gore and death, not romance
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I know haha 
i always prefer gore over romance any Day.