Okay guys, I’ve made some changes with the first chapter. I’m sure I still need to revisit the chapter, fix a lot of tense changes and such…but I’ve went ahead and started working on the second chapter (which is still w.i.p). I’m kind of tired at the moment, so I will continue working on it tomorrow.
I forgot to change some of the stats with the relationships with Logan and Jester, so I will do that tomorrow.
As for the background of the character, I will remove that from the stats. However, initial physical appearance (like hair color, skin tone and eye color) will be choices in the very near future.
If chapter 2’s current context is too brutal and needs to be censored or toned done, please let me know.
Thanks everyone.
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Edit: Added more content as promised. Added eye color, hair color, skin tone. Umm a few things might a little weird, so let me know.
Wow @Shell_San i am loving the new update and eye ,skin and hair color , cant wait for more, keep up the good work! By the way Will The mc continue to eat human meat If it so wants to? I Wonder how the mc relationship with Hassan Will play out since my character choose not to get back at him
I’m confused, why do I become a cannibal even when I don’t eat the fingers? And why do I have to become sterile? So my choices on that matter won’t matter?
You become an cannibal because you eat flesh that is given to you. You eat the meat because it has been roughly a week without eating anything. However, I will add another choice in the next update that will allow you to eat the food or not. Sadly, if you choose not to eat, you will die.
What do you mean sterile? I do not understand.
Your choices do matter, to some extent. You are not God, you do not dictate how other people treat you.
If anyone else besides you feels the same as you regarding being forced into cannibalism, I may change the story but if its just you, I’m not going to change it.
Ah okay. Alright, alright. I’ll change the story so you aren’t technically forced into becoming a cannibal. I’ll post an update in a week or two. So please be patient.
Also, the sterile thing… is… part of the story. Sorry.
The sterile thing worries me I see people trying to force my mc to do… things that I would prefer to not specify but anyway this is interesting so far.
About the Hannibal thing - a halfway agree, that should be a choice, but not of the “ew, that gross or something”, but more like, I made my MC cannibal, that was my choice not someone else and until that someone comes and shoves human meat in MC mouth by force, that this choice should stay.
In my first after update play-trough I choose to eat “chicken” finger - fun options, playing again tried other options and after realizing that we become a cannibal anyway, was a let down.
And the sterile thing - I have no problem with it. MC had no saying just as much as ending up in prison. Part of the story.
I’m very interested to see where this WiP goes! I really like the writing and the whole darker route things are going in! I’ll certainly help with progress/demoing if you want.
While I have updated, I feel like there is a lot still that needs to be done for the first two chapters.
Some of the brutality for chapter 2 needs to be censored still, so if you do not feel comfortable with brutality I would advise you wait until I update again.
I do have exams coming up, so the next update might be delayed (sorry).
I know I need to add more variety with the options and make some of the previous choices matter, so please be patient with me. I will not move on to chapter 3 until I feel chapter 2 is better. At the moment it feels like the choices are either go along with it and suffer or be an angry type of person. I will add more lighter options soon, I promise!
I think I made the appropriate changes for the cannibalism option but If I missed out any text or something feels off let me know.
Keep in mind that I have not had the chance to actually play test this update.
I’ve playtested this, the updates seem to be working, but I’ve noticed some things.
Fod lunch, he said would give…"
"“Put the tray and contents outside wen you are done,”
The other thing is at the end of the current chapter (2) when you check stats you see the word “Cannibalistic” repeated several times next to “Challenges:”
By the way Will The mc continue to eat human meat If it so wants to? I Wonder how the mc relationship with Hassan Will play out since my character choose not to get back at him
