Awe i was hoping for purple eyes lol. I can’t wait for more
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The Game perfect but I was wondering if Mc will be getting more power he is powerful yes but I lead that there are God’s in the world will the mc have the chance of becoming one and will he get the choice to destroy,rule, create, a world and
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I’m glad you liked it! Yes, the MC will definitely grow more powerful, but not on that scale. It’s important to keep in mind that their abilities come from Azgor—so their absolute upper limit would be reaching the same level of power Azgor had 300 years ago. But… would that even be possible in a human body? Will the MC ever truly get there? And if they do, what kind of cost will it come with?
All good questions—and ones you’ll have to uncover as the story unfolds.
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Is Ruby one of the ROs?
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Yes, for now the planned ROs are Walls, Ruby, Ecbert, Theresa, Arael, and Zatus. But nothing is set in stone—there’s always a chance the list might change or expand in the future
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Are there any poly routes planned? Totally Gucci if not, but I always ask.
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I don’t currently have any plans to write a poly route, but I’m not completely against the idea either. Sometimes, while writing, certain dynamics naturally start falling into place—even if I didn’t originally intend for them to. So, I won’t say it’s definitely off the table, but I’d also suggest not getting your hopes up on this.
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Was the game taken down? It says Game not found right now
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COGdemos’s links have all malfunctioned it seems. Searching for it on site works fine. Second game this has happened to for me.
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Ya it works now, think an update was pushed to COGdemos just now and it broke the links
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I haven’t figured out how to edit the post yet, the edit button is gone, so here’s the working link for now:
Still learning how things work around here—sorry about that! lol
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Does the MC have an increased lifespan?
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I love it! The only thing I must say it’s not a criticism, it’s just an observation that many “I” are written as “i”
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Sounds very interesting
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Another small mistake
Forgot to get a screenshot of it, but whenever you ask Arael questions for the first time and she tells you her story, the text repeats ‘You consider what to ask for the first question’ even after the actual first question.
Small mistake here: Azgor’s second sentence is right next to his previous one, even though they’re separated by quotation marks.
Not sure if it was intentional, but it would flow a bit better if the second one was placed in a new paragraph
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Yes, they do! All of the experiments have an extended lifespan—no one knows exactly how long, but it’s definitely much longer than that of a normal human. And in the Warden’s case, having Azgor within them and, as a result, highly accelerated regenerative abilities means their lifespan will likely be even longer. But again, no one truly knows how long they might live…
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Thanks for telling me! fixed both of them.
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I don’t know if anyone else had mentioned it or not, but when you choose the choice that allows you to imput your own name, it will just continously load. I never made it to imput my own name. I see potienial in this IF though, seeing I liked what I read so far. Can’t wait to read more.
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Thank you! I’m really glad you enjoyed it. I didn’t know about that error—thanks for letting me know! I’ll make sure to fix it as soon as I can.
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I really like the premise of this WIP so far. I love being put in the shoes of human created to be a weapon of war. The most popular example of this trope being Wolverine from Marvel.
Which isn’t a bad thing your world building is simple yet unique. I love the fact that you’re allowing my character to evolve past their default state as the story progresses.
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