The Dark Bloom

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But if they take out Greenland then there would be no one to take the plant. Surely the Taa can spare a million soldiers to take it out.

They don’t even need to kill the people in Greenland, just enslave and torture them. That’s a hell of a lot better than leaving them to be.

If they forgot wouldn’t they look at a map? “Hey we own the whole planet. Wait, we don’t own that. Come on boys we got a country to conquer”

Sorry but I can’t look past this Greenland debacle. For the rest of the game, I’ll have to see it first.

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Savior2012, I’m not sure if you think you just posted a demo, but we can’t use the file location you posted. That’s the location on your computer where the .index file is located. You need to post the game on a website, like dropbox. I have no idea how to use dropbox, so I can’t help you there. But this website I barely skimmed should be able to help you: http://choicescriptdev.wikia.com/wiki/Publishing_your_game

Sorry if I completely misunderstood why you posted the file location on your computer and this post turns out totally unnecessary.

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Oh sorry! Let me see if I can fix that.

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“They won’t go to Greenland because the people will most likely get the Dark Bloom and stop the Taa.”

I do not understand what you mean by this. If they knew that there will be people aiming to get the Dark Bloom, won’t the Taa take them out immediately instead to prevent any chances for humanity’s survival? Also, I agree with @ADNox, if the species is that destructive, then I don’t get how it hasn’t destroyed itself yet. Plus, I find it hard to believe that an entire race is THAT destructive. One or two evil people, sure, but an entire race?

The whole journey itself I can’t comment on because you haven’t given that much information of what the characters can do, how they get their supplies, what they will face, what will happen, what will their team mates be like, etc. Especially since I’m not willing to assume anything because it’s waaaaay too far in the future than I’m accustomed to, so it’s kind of… Unpredictable, with the weapons, the technology, and everything. I mean, don’t get me wrong, the whole quest thing sounds interesting, and it isn’t wrong, but I’m just saying I’m not getting enough info to judge it. The things that I do ‘kind of’ have enough information of is the background.

I’m sorry if this sounds like ripping or something, don’t think it that way, I’m just saying what I honestly think. I do like the idea, like I said, the whole quest thing and all, and don’t let us discourage you. We’re just trying to smooth out all the loopholes that we find to help your story. Don’t misunderstand us, okay?

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There’s still no demo link for us to use. The URL for the dropbox game will be different from the file location you posted. You need to follow the instructions I posted, and give us a new link.

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I have to say that despite all the loopholes, I look forward to seeing how this game turns out.