The chronicles of second chance, book one. New files uploaded, 08/16/2023

For the sake of knowing what I am looking for, would you please give me an example of said grammatical errors?

Some examples of problems I found:

There are some punctuation problems. Some weird placements



And then there are some weird or wrong word choices


Some spelling errors




And finally, some weird sentence structures


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Thank you. :slight_smile:
Would it be at all possible for you to write down the examples as opposed to putting them in images, as my voiceover tends to have a hissy fit when it runs into images and as such they kind of wind up becoming useless because of that.
Also NVDA, which is the screen reader I use on my computer has the same issue when images are involved, so unfortunately I can’t just flip over to my computer and read the images that way.

Sure, I can do that. Does voiceover read Asterisks or bolded letters differently? I highlighted some words in the photos, so I want to do that same kind of thing

Bolded as far as I know no,yes, if you put thesign before the word, it should read it.

As of writing, new content has been added. As such, please enjoy.

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uhm i think that mightve broken it… on startup an error appears and you cant actually play at all

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Thanks for the heads up, that should be fixed now.

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candle line 154: invalid ${} variable substitution at letter 297

error at gender selection fyi

That is fixed now, thanks for the heads-up.

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Love it

As of now, new contact has been added to the book.
As always, please comment on what you like and what you don, and please indicate any errors so that I can fix said.

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Found this: candle line 186: increasing indent not allowed, expected 0 was 2

Also the save system isnt working.

The error should be fixed now, save system might take a little longer as I have to re-educate myself on how it works again and the variable for it.

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candle line 1712: bad label mc_flirt_concern3

That should be fixed now. Also, save system should be updated/fixed in the next few days.

Save system should work now, please post if you have any issues.

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