@idonotlikeusernames Yessss, be unreasonable. And no one changed you There's only one guy with hands, and that's something he definitely wouldn't do.
@CricketRee Yay, I'm glad you liked it! And what are the other fairy tale WIP's? Did I miss them? I want to read them!
I looked for it, but couldn't find it? Maybe I already found it and forgot...
@squarelyblue midterms fistbump
This game isn't really based on the Disney story. Not that I don't like that version or anything, it's just that I like my fairy tales a tad more depressing That said, the mayor doesn't want to bone you so bad he'd square up with the Sorcerer.
Yiana's a weird person. She's got her reasons, but what they are, only she knows for now.
I do wonder how I could make the conversation seem weightier. I can't actually make it longer, because you do need to leave soon. Would you say the options where you get angry or scared are less rushed? Is it a tension thing?
I tried to give the option of continuing the conversation without extending the time, with the 'not go- reason' option, but should I make it more accessible? Like have the options be 'don't go- go- hey we're not done talking here'?
Hmmmm... food for thought. And don't worry, it wasn't nitpicky, it was helpful. I'll think about implementing things better when I have more time!