Ten Million (WiP - Updated 11/18) Day 1 Complete

Hm…it’s working for me. Do you mind sending a screenshot of what it says?

It’s doesn’t set girls true if you are male and neither set boys true if you are female.
https://s16.postimg.org/7htn7g3np/Screenshot_20161030_235512.png

You’re not able to flirt with any of the female contestants? I moved the coding down to after ethnicity.

No I can’t flirt with any female contestants, I tried again and had the same problem.

Try this:
Straight
*set orientation “Straight”

*if (gender = “Male”)
*set girls true
*goto hair_color
*if (gender = “Female”)
*set boys true
*goto hair_color

Updated it. Any luck?

Now it works as intended.

But I found another bug:

The teams lines up in order. The Heroes have, Irma, Patrick, Billy, you, Max, Miranda, Julie, then Katie. The Villains have, J, Chuck, Kristen, Brian, Ivy, Nate, Sarah, then Kirk

My character is a villain and J is a hero.

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Oh, like what’s the main reason for you to be in the show.

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I think it’s the Ten Millions Dollars.

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okay, i didn’t try the updated part yet… just want to post something :grin:

[quote]“I Love Max?” Max looks like he’s considering the name for a bit before he breaks into a smile. “I like it.”[/quote]
(that’s right, i suggest “I Love Max” for the the alliance name… and im laughing with Max nonchalant reaction to it… lol. pardon my delusions :yum:

EDIT : here is the report, just notice one typo

The brunette is wearing a cheerleading uniform for some odd reason. Her skit is a little too short for a competition like this. (skirt)

and i really want to save Nate from her sister, poor nate, let me take care of you~, and i want to messing with that rich guys :smiling_imp: he will regret to underestimate me when i join the villain path, and somehow i find Kirk enticing :blush: its not really common for me to like the bad guy type :confused:

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I like this WIP. Makes me feel like I’m in Total Drama Island… that’s the only show I watch that is reality tv vote off base other than Chopped on the food network :sweat_smile:

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Just a quick question! I was planning on doing only the hero route for now so that I could update more often, is everyone alright with that? I could go Villain if that’s the preferred team.

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its alright for me whatever route you do :slight_smile: coz i like both route… hmm, why dont you make a poll for everyone else then?

which route do you guys prefer? :

  • Hero Route
  • Villain Route

0 voters

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I’m far to sweet to be a villain :blush:

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I always play as a hero so that was the easiest poll yet. I loved the new update, it felt so good actually winning the challenge and not having to send someone home. That’s the worst part of these elimination competitions, having to vote for people. So I was glad to put it off just a little while.

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here is some report :
gender-swap and typo : [spoiler]
You shoot Ash a text that you’re at her front steps while waiting for him to open the door to his parent’s house.
(his)

Ashton’s dad passed away when he was born, his mom left his at a young age, and his uncle was drunk most of the time. (him)

Still, you and Ashton have been dating for three years now and you loved his with all your heart, despite her financial problems. (him and then his)

“I’ve got tons of stuff for us today!” She tells you as you enter the dirtiest room in the house. There are dishes and food laying all around like usual. (He)

What you’re not used to seeing is the amount of alcohol on the table. It was at least triple the amount she usually brought when you hung out. (he)

“Please, babe?” She asks. “Just one?” (He)

As the police carry Ash out in a stretcher, you stand nervously in the kitchen. You don’t what you would do without your boyfriend. You…you couldn’t lose his. No tears come out as you stand still. You’re in too much shock to cry. (you miss something there… i assume it should be : “You don’t know what…”)

You smile while putting your drink on the table by hers, then put your arms around his waist. “If I am a bad boy, would I care whether you like it or not?” (hmm… what is the opposite of hers again? :sweat_smile: coz my ash is a He)

You wanted to win this. You couldn’t some spoiled rich kid beat you. (you miss something there… i assume you mean : “You couldn’t let some…”)

He gives you a confused look. “What are you talking about? That was a team effort, don’t blame yourself…I didn’t too great either anyways.”
(miss something there again :grin: i supposed it should be : (“i didn’t do too great”)-- ehm… im not sure about its grammar (im suck at grammar) so should it be do or did, im not sure… sorry :sweat_smile:

(when i let the Hero team Lose, after the vote scene there is a missing scene after this : )

and then it jumps to “good night” scene…
[/spoiler]

and that flashback scene really break my heart :cry: beside Jay bestfriend relationship (which we have to be opposite team… not a problem/im not complaining… it really a nice touch for the story.)
that MC supposed to have a comatose boyfriend (Ash) is really really break my heart :joy:. now i cant decide should i wait for him (if there is a chance he is still alive) or should i pursue Max (Hero Route) or Nate (Villain Route) in the game

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Thanks for the errors! I’ll fix them tomorrow. The most I’ll say about your problem is that you can’t go wrong with choosing any of those three romance options.

Regarding the flashbacks:

Getting community service because of opened bottles of alcohol seems all kinds of ridiculous to me… Also someone who has drunk so much to get put into a coma wouldn’t be able to string together a single coherent sentence and the kissing would be sloppy af… Kissing someone who is just drunk is still sloppy lol. Why is a cop there in the first place? If MC rang for an ambulance it would just be paramedics giving them the stink eye… And most likely she’s just going to die anyway.

James is a loser so I wish there was an option to punch him or something but otherwise universities are kind of assholes…

I don’t know anything about baseball so I can’t comment that at all except for saying it reminds me of that new tv show “Pitch”. Except it’s double trouble female baseball peoples.

Is the game set in America?

I know I’m thinking too much on this… the alcohol poisoning girlfriend in a coma flashback was just too much immersion breaking for me.

Hero Route for one sole reason…

Miranda.

Minor note about the update:I was quite disappointed about how you couldn’t be the first one to get eliminated.Surely,there’d be some kind of acheivement for being the first one to be given the boot.

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Hero route, just because.
I never had interest to pick the villain route in any game, I don’t see why people like it so much lol

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I really liked this game! It seems fun so far. I don’t really have much to say, besides the fact that when I saw the ‘Miranda’ character’s description… I totally freaked out!

Only reason being, you described me perfectly. :astonished: My name is Miranda, I’m ‘caucasian’, I’m a fast reader, I have brown hair and brown eyes, my favorite series is Harry Potter, and I’m an introvert to the highest degree. (And social anxiety!!) Only difference is she’s two years older.

It’s not really relevant, but I thought it was funny as heck so I wanted to share. :joy: Do you know me?? Should I close my curtains???

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