Thanks for the comments. I’ve added the first scene with any choices. It’s mostly just an establishment of what the character is, the next scene will start establishing your personality. I’m a fairly slow writer and very much a revisionist, constantly tweaking lines here and there as I go across if I notice anything out of place. It’s been a slow process getting to this point, but I’ve added more in the last two days than in the previous month so I felt ready to put something out there, to address some specific comments:
@fantom The prologue is before the building of character and an old scene I had intended for a comic that I retooled. There’s a very good reason for the lack of control. Some of which was admittedly fridge logic. You can get a glimpse of it if you choose the right job and/or implants in the update. Mostly it was a sacrifice for narrative structure. I needed the character to go from point A to point B without trying to break the rhythm of the scene.
@SpiderGirl Thank you, I was unaware that there was in fact a specific genre for what I was doing. Themoreyouknow.jpeg Also, as for species, there’s only one right now that’s an option and it’s left specifically vague for everyone to fill in what they see as the perfect human/alien hybrid. The only details I’ve given is that they’re light-blind and have tails.
As to everyone else, thank you for the compliments, I’ll try to get more out there relatively quickly. However, I prefer quality over quantity and have to work at a pace that suits whatever inspiration I have.