Somewhere Out There (Scifi Elder God WIP, )

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Hiya, I’m a long time COG/HG/ETC.. reader and I’ve started working on a game at long last. Currently I’m aiming for around 1000 words per day. I’m currently at only 2,038 words but am looking for opinions on my writing style n stuff.

SO. WHAT is this about? Somewhere Out There is a heavily dystopian Scifi world set in the Sol system in the year 2240. You will be playing an entity from a realm Humanity has labeled “Terminus.” The plan is that your first choice will set the tone for your interaction with Sol, that being your “birth” unto existence. It’s meant to be a mix of cosmic horror, power fantasy and DEPRESSION.

Down the line, there will of course be character creation, POTENTIALLY romance, ETC. This is my first dedicated ChoiceScript game so please have MERCY on me but I absolutely welcome feedback. It can help me improve my writing and such.

Forgive me is my formatting is bad, I’ve never posted on this forum or actually done any ChoiceScript writing before. I’ll probably edit this page to fix stuff up as I go! If you guys have any forum posting tips and tricks, feel free to let me know.

To play the demo, go here: CoGDemos

AI Disclosure:

No — This project does not contain the output of Generative AI
Yes — This project contains the output of Generative AI

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Though very short, the story so far and premise seems very interesting will wait for more

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Yea to short but it has my attention. Can’t wait for more and I like aiko, want more of her

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Ayyyee this seems neat Ill definitely keep a eye out on this. Curious on how this Elder type god thing can go. Very curious on if there will be different forms you can take and all that!!!

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Keeping a close eye on this one for sure.

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Hey! Love the idea, and what you have so far. I also see that you’re a fan of Darker than Black, or at least some of the music. Excellent taste.

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Looks very interesting although very short. Looking forward to see where it goes.
All the best, Author!

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Very interesting concept! And I’m liking the writing ao far, as short as it is. Looking forward to it.

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Amazing work. Few times I had appreciated the writing of an auther together with the plot. Absolutely fantastic work your doing here and please do keep up! This is on my bookmark list for sure!