Sleepville (WIP) (Second Update hopefully to come at 10k words)

[AChubbyBlackCat]

Hi,

Congrats on publishing your demo. That in itself is a big first step.

I echo Mara in that right now it’s way too short to give good feedback that can help your story grow into what you want it to be.

I would encourage you to check out these two threads (one of which leads to a discord group):

Interest Check Thread

This thread is for anyone that wants to do an interest check. If you have yet to make a demo, post in this thread rather than making a new thread. Once you have a demo, you make a thread for your game specifically (either by clicking the link button at the bottom of your post, then selecting “New Topic”, or by just creating a new post in the #hosted-games:works-in-progress catagory.

https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/beginners-writing-group/90757

Here you will be able to talk to other blooming authors and perhaps get some ideas for the concept of your story.