Shattering Time - Demo (Abandoned)

Will we have bonding time with our siblings in which we’ll learn valuable life lessons? Just wondering.

You broke it:

Prologue 3 line 221: bad label last

Nearest text: Ash grins at you over her shoulder as she turns around and walks away. You see her lips moving though you strain to hear it. After a moment, you decipher what Ash said:

“Take care, alright?”

@LordOfLA

Gosh… something is always broken XD Though I used the quicktest… well, whatever o.o
Fixed it :o

@Talkingtaco

Well, so far I had not intended to do that (sure, there is talking and everything, though not real bonding?)
But I guess if I find a suitable point in the story, I can include that.

New issue, might be intentional:

Couldn’t load scene ‘chapter1-2’ file doesn’t exist

Nearest text: Having no further reasons to stay, you decide to go and leave Ash for now. The woman had enough reasons to be annoyed today, you do not need to be added to the list. Having no further reasons to stay,

You watch her for a moment, before going away and closing the doors behind you.

That… is not intentional o.o
I am going right now through the game to find out what is causing the problem, though when I click on the Index file and play there everything is working… just after the compile part it does not work… oh well, will try doing what I can

Alright, It should now be fixed everywhere… I played it through many times and I hope it works for you guys as well now. Coding is not one of my strength it seems XD

I love the new update :smiley: Everything seems to be working fine now.

1 Like

Thank you! I am glad you like it :smiley:
May I ask, what do you think so far from the Characters ? :3

Found a grammar error. I’m sorry if someone already posted this:

1 Like

Thank you very much :slight_smile: I Will fix that immediately ~

@Nekumura OMG i love this game demo :sparkling_heart::+1: Looking forward for more :slight_smile: and keep up the great work! Im loving Ash and Taylor, thoose guys are awsome! :slight_smile:

By the way can a gay MC RO Taylor/Ash in the game, If they are RO options?

And can our MC become Evil? And wreck everything ? Muhahah xD

2 Likes

Haha, Thank you!
Im glad that you like it :smile:

Ash and Taylor are indeed RO, so you can have them if you want ~
So far, for what I have planned, these are the Option you can have so far:
Ash, Taylor, Cassandra, Finnian and Shana.

And of course you can become evil :smiley: As I love evil characters (hehe) I am giving the MC the chance to become evil as well. (And thus, there is the evil stat bar :D)

5 Likes

Yesssss! I cant wait! Muhaha everyone will feel my wrath xD Also so many RO options! You made my day @Nekumura :slight_smile:

I wanna know more about Shana. I don’t know why, but I’ve always liked the sort of “eccentric, scientist, hot chick” character traits xD looking forward for more.

I really love this game and Ash,the story interesting and the characters pretty well written. :smiley:
Ash, Taylor and Finnian caught my attention already; Ash though, is my most favorite for now. :blush:
I really can’t wait for more! :smile:

@kitkat
Thank you very much :slight_smile: I am glad that you like this story and the characters as well.
It seems like I am better in writing male characters than female characters :smiley:
I hope to bring out the next part of the chapter very soon. I am not really sure when that will be, but I hope it will be around next week, perhaps a bit sooner.

@Talkingtaco
Don’t worry, you will get more time with Shana in the future :wink:

1 Like

Hey everyone, I just wanted to leave a quick note here for the soon to follow update :smiley:

In the next section, there will be a lot of surprises, depending if you are going to choose one of the three main courses or one a little bit more hidden. The surprises can be good, as well as very bad, so… Be careful: smiley:

What I need to do:

Finish Choice1 - Finished

Finish Choice2

Finish Choice3

Finish hidden Choice4 - Semi-Finished

Add a kissing scene with Taylor - Finished

Finnian dies (depends on Choice) - Finished

Taylor dies (depends on Choice) - Finished

Shana dies (depends on Choice)

You die (depends on Choice) - Semi-Finished

Leading back to main story

So far, I guess I am around 1/3 done… I think i might get it done before Christmas ^^

1 Like

The vehicle is standing in front of a traffic light which has turned to read, so you are not moving.

should be red not read

1 Like

facepalm
Yay, Thank you XD Will fix that in a sec!

kinda just skimming thru and noticed that, first I usually check for coding errors, then go back for grammar but that one caught my eye first.