Shattered : Oblivion (WIP, 96k words) - STANDALONE REWORK TEASER AVAILABLE ON POST 494 (31/10/2024)

I hope it’s not a toonish cricket.

Yea they are the more baddass elves.
Wood elves are treehuggers high as a kite.

High elves are noble holier than thou.

And dark elves they are angry and hate nearly everyone and are the ones you gotta worry about possibly shanking you in the night for no reason other than they forgot where they put the sheath
For thier knife.

@taldira happy anniversary cake day.

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Loved it, loved it, loved it.

I didn’t record any typos because I think you’re rewriting it? Nothing major. I didn’t spot any inconsistencies, but I felt like it jumped pretty quickly from daddy giving me my grimoire he’s clobbering soldiers. I thought I missed something.

Looking forward to more!

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Yeah, I will have some work rewriting the prologue and chapter one. I’m going to add some content to places like the grimoire scene that feel somewhat quick to jump from a situation to another.

Well, in this world they’re not really hippies. XD

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I’m going to calmly overlook these insults and take the moral high ground. Hope you feel better soon @bl00dragon

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Hope so too because my brain is basically hot mush by this point.

Don’t know why but I suddenly wondered which kind of elves you loved the most?

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Oooooh. :thinking: I love all elves but I have to say wood elves, with high elves close behind. Dark elves are a little sadistic for my tastes. I quite like the high elf condescending attitude but also the wood elf way of life. But they’re all so awesome. :stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye:

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Oh no, my nemesis is a meme. Well then again it’s better than the Wright King’s nemesis

“Hi I’m Conscious, I’ll be looking over your shoulder and silently judging you while you work. Occasionally I’ll giggle to just make you feel uncomfortable. And don’t worry about the breathing.”

But Elves invented plumbing…

Plus how do you clean out your ears?

I’m guessing Santa’s.

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Damn it. Now I’ve got to start my list all over again.

giphy

a) huge ear wipes
b) advanced plumbing
c) magic
d) we don’t :smirk: 1000 year old ear wax

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D for wood elves.
C for Dark Elves.
B for High Elves.
A for Vagrants.

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…Ok that’s pretty accurate

giphy

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Been procrastinating on my schoolwork lately and decided to practice my digital art skills. Thought it would be fun to draw my vision of the mc for some of my favorite WIPs.

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so…

is this mc tied to the mc of the other story ?

Btw…this is VERY VERY GOOD! I love it .

oh and also…

how do you get the amnesia ? blade in your ribs…but amnesia ?

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Well, since I really hate every single of those things I hope you have my grinder ready, I’ll have to dispose of something later. :3

Honestly they just found what the the people of the old world left behind and made it look like they had the idea.

I never realized how Santa’s are a race of slaves made to serve the greater devil by the name of Claus until now.

Nice. I want to strangle them a little less now. :blush:

Nice. Is it something you do on your own, or is that one of the things you learn at your school?

Not directly, the Shattered will set several events in motion, but they have no direct tie to the Wight King. Though you could say the MC of the other story wouldn’t be quite the same if the Shattered didn’t exist.

It was an unexpected turn of events.

There is three main factors to it:


The sword that stabbed them wasn’t an ordinary sword, not only did it come a hair’s breadth of killing the Shattered but it also sealed them.

Because of the seal, one of the countermeasures the Shattered used on themselves in case of another event backfired.

The Shattered fell into a large torrent, and the current battered them quite bad.

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I don’t think anyone has asked this but at full strength who would be more powerful. This MC or the other MC?

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It depends on the situation, but the Shattered would be at a disadvantage against the Wight King. In term of pure firepower, the Shattered wins, but the Wight King is the perfect counter.

I’d say 7 out of 10 times, the Wight King would win.

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Ohh so the shattered has more latent power… Good, good to know.

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Oh… then filthy knife ears except dark elves

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We all know you’re secretly in love with the pointiest, edgiest ones. :smirk:

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Secretly? I thought was pretty open with the fact that i consider dark elves the only good elf besides dead ones, no scratch that, half elves are good too.

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Made a small update to the demo, added the end of chapter one.

Now I’m going to focus a bit on the Wight King, while reworking what I’ve already written for Shattered.
https://dashingdon.com/play/bl00dragon/shattered-the-bliss-of-ignorance/mygame/index.php?cb=89402

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