Played this today and good lord the hate humans route is absolutely hilarious 
i kicked a dude in the balls and spat at a woman twice then proceeded to bang her god knows why
Amazing writing, great characters
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Out of context that last bit is disturbing and makes me consider avoiding trying that route. Which I wasnât interested before, that line makes it more cringe.
Thank you for the detailed answer! 
Then you archived your goal. 
lines for outcomes where Crystal was spared intentionally
I know. I played this option too. 
I decided against it.
A tweak of conditions would be great - a âI faked an attack / spared Crystalâ-route. I think only a few additional lines are missing. The consequences are not so different from the âfailedâ-route.
That line was addressed to both Damon and Hadaly
Maybe change âWhatever happens, know that Iâm with you.â to âWhatever happens, know that Iâm with you two.â Makes it clearer?
(Iâm exited about the additional Damon content.)
fairly specific conditions to be met
Iâm feeling like Iâm on a good way, but I probably missed something. 
No pressure. I wasnât expecting any fitting branch. I just wanted to give an insight of my thoughts.
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Any fix ?
Epilogue Update. The adventure is over, for better or worse. There is nothing to do but face the consequences of your choices and experience one of the nine endings featured in this one, final, closing chapter of Saturnine.
Though this is the last chapter, itâs not quite the final update. I still need to export the game to HTML and add some extra content before opening an official beta. If you still want to play the DashingDon version, now is a good time to start, since it wonât get any further updates and will have to be taken down sooner or later.
Thanks to everyone who played, commented on, or even looked at this game during its lengthy production. I hope you had a nice Winter Solstice, I wish you Merry Christmas and I hope to hear from some of you during beta-testing.
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Extra content, you say? What final bits are you adding?
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I just noticed this, but the âis it too late to call westâ option doesnât gray out after itâs selected.
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Oh btw, Idk if this is because itâs unfinished, but giving yourself to hammon doesnât go to his epilogue, it just goes to the ending screen(âŚEven though the epilogue itself is written?)
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For one, I must make a checkpoint system that exists in the actual code, as opposed to just in DashingDon. I would have done that earlier, but the IDE Iâm using hasnât been updated to include that functionality, and it wasnât a relevant issue until now.
As for actual story content, I intend to squeeze an additional scene between the fourth and the fifth chapters, mostly to foreshadow some events that I felt were set up poorly. I already have 5000 words of it written down, Iâll just need to write another 5000 by the end of the week.
The epilogue for that route is indeed written, I just forgot to update the rhea_2 scene so that it directs to the relevant bit. Itâs trivial to fix, so I guess that will be my âfinal updateâ to the DashingDon build.
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Good dice roll
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Do I need a new save? When I accept to contain the dusk the next chapter goes straight to end without the epilogue, but if someone else is chosen it shows the epilogue
Whatâs the last choice youâve made? Or the last line before the ending? I suspect itâs a similar error to the one I just fix, but Iâm having trouble locating this one.
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when i choose to join dusk it goes straight to the end, no epilogue
edit: anything involving me being a vessel does the same
edit2: same with hadaly
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inconsistency about heart and head here if you pass the Database check and have good rel with Lisa, same if you fail the check though if you pass it and have less than 45 rel the inconsistency isnât there
Another bug I ran into, when Lisa was made a vessel but rejected dusk the scene played out and everyone (except kirril) went home happy and no fight was had, but then it looped back into the fight scene with lisa
âDamon⌠Hadaly⌠thank you for having my back.â
is this it? is it finished?
Spacing issue here
From my last save point, I mostly skipped through chapter 11. I spotted some changes that I enjoy. Well done.
â ââAnd thatâs the Bayesian Path, everyone.â Lisa claps politely. "â
" too much at the end (still in chapter 11)
I got no chapter 12. I think the last few lines of chapter 11 changed a bit:
Last Text before end screen
Itâs difficult to believe how well it all went. How youâve saved everyone while losing no one. Itâs such a convenient ending, such a ray of sunshine in such dark times. But even such incredible things happen sometimes, provided you have centuries of experience in doing the impossible.
âWell, I suddenly feel a lot better about myself,â Damon says once everyone else is gone. âItâs been a fun ride, boss. Despite everything.â
As well as friends by your side.
A small epilogue would have been nice⌠I manly want to know what happens to Saturn Nine and the book. And I spared a lot of people. Does this have any consequences?
Also seems like Iâve reached the only ending where the book doesnât explode (and met the fairly specific conditions yay! 
). Would be nice if the ending was celebrated a bit more. Could imagine a reader who has the book explode the first time through trying to prevent it the second time.
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