Rise of the forsaken WIP

Yes, Your Highness, the MC will gain the ability to shift into a draconic form—and eventually a full dragon. :muscle::fire::sparkles:

But their parents sealed these powers, fearing they might reveal the MC’s hideout to his grandfather. And Only in the moment of extreme danger will the seal break, unleashing their wrath to protect what they hold dear.

The real question is: will they control this power—or be consumed by the dragon’s fury? :smiling_imp:

If you managed to shift your magic and strength will increase but you will have to face the consequences

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Oh don’t worry what I will do with my powers your Lordship it’s not like I went to become the the supreme ruler of the WHOLE planet or anything…:smiling_imp:

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I am sure of your pure intentions my king after all :smiling_imp:
After all we are supposed to free our kingdom from the tryaant king not to replace him with other one . :crown::fire:

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supposed yes but we all have a devil on our shoulder telling us to do bad stuff

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In our delicate situation my king I think we are the devil .
after all Dragons are considered powerful demonic creatures

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should be capital in "the, and barley instead of barely is a spelling mistake

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T should be capital in "the, and barley instead of barely is a spelling mistake.

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Oh my days :scream:
Grave mistakes like this can’t be forgiven my king

But on the positive side it’s already FIXED

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Lol,I didn’t mean to criticise you for it, I myself require autocorrect frequently to make sure I’m not misspelling, I have noticed some more mistakes which I’ll send :sweat_smile:


My MCs name is Andrew not Logan, I think it was meant to be pride instead of bride, and usual instead of usaul, another thing is that in the game it says that the witch pays us in coin for our help, but I didn’t get any coin for helping her, only the cloak.

Also I have to say this, the game is super exciting, all the games that you took inspiration from are my favorites, have you played an unexpectedly green journey? I just finished it today and it was absolutely incredible, probably my favourite HG game of all time.

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Fixed, fixed and fixed

You really have keen eyes my king

Yes I found it so good I love complicated fantasy games.

But I am still loyal to those :slightly_smiling_face::saluting_face:

Mistakes no matter how small they are still mistakes my king😔

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GREETINGS, MY NOBLE KINGS AND QUEENS OF DRACIA!

I bring you exciting news from the realm. I’ve decided to hold off on sneak peeks and polls for now, as I’m fully focused on delivering a 10K-words update ( currently I have 6.3k words so expect me soon !) But that’s not all—this update will arrive alongside some thrilling additions:

  • A Tumblr page that will have many sneak peeks and polls in the future*( but of course I will keep my loyalty to our thread her)*
  • A link to the game on Moody Ink, to give it a broader stage to shine. And for my monarchs who don’t prefer dashingdon.

In the meantime, I’d love to hear from you: How are you finding the game so far? Your thoughts and feedback mean the world to me!

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moodyink is still down^^

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Of course my king

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This IF has potential but the transitioning is a bit off, there are some grammatical errors and timelines aren’t matching up. The part where we go from MC being an infant to 10 years in the future, Mira says they’re both 18 ?. I really love the concept and believe this IF could be really amazing with some editing and polishing.

Yes my monarch I know and I have revised and tested most of the files and made some minor changes and rewrote some parts.

I noticed this days ago and I edited it already :sweat_smile: but I didn’t upload it immediately because no one mentioned it.

My aim with this WiP is to see if the readers will like the general concept of my game. This WiP represents less than 1% of what I plan to create or the features ,I intend to add in the future.

If you could show me where exactly I will change them immediately for you my monarch.

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Ahhhhhh ok now I understand. Again you have an amazing Idea for this IF so keep up the good work can’t wait for what you plan next for it :pinched_fingers:t3::sparkles:

Thanks for your kind words your highness

Trust me I have a lot of plans :smiling_imp:

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Random request, but I really hope we get to be a merchant somewhere in the game and haggle the shit out of others, don’t know why but I love the feeling of getting a good deal on some item in these kind of games :face_exhaling:

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Hm… I have been thinking whether to make the MC stick to a single profession or make you an awesome all rounder monarch , guided only by your skills. :thinking:

But since I like the sound of that , I promise to look into it your highness especially this haggling thing .