Rise From the Ashes (WIP)

I’m a very new author so any and all feedback is appreciated. And yes I understand it’s not tens of thousands of words yet but this will help push me to get more updates done. So I hope you enjoy what I do have!

I’ve begun work on my new game tentatively titled Rise From the Ashes.

Currently I only have the prologue but I’m working on another scene I’m hoping to finish next week or sooner.

AI Disclosure: I’m using AI cover art from Grok temporarily.

There’s a link to my Patreon in the demo as well.

To play the demo, go here: https://cogdemos.ink/go/7582

UPDATE: I’ve redone the prologue let me know what you think!

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I can’t seem to get past this page. and the stats screen doesn’t work either.

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Same

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What is it about? What’s the pitch?

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That is the only complete part currently and i need to fix a piece of code so it will end instead of trying to load something thats not there yet. That’s why you can’t get past. There aren’t really any stats yet but I’ll fix that. Thanks!

Stats were added.

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Rise From the Ashes (WIP) - #5 by DarkSaint223 Answer

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The PC’s village is destroyed, you’re the only survivor, do you seek revenge for what was taken from you or do you make a new life for yourself? I’m planning out the story as I go so I have a general direction I want to go in but it depends on where the story naturally wants to go. I plan on updating and explaining the current description as it develops. Hope this helps!

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Updated prologue and added welcome page