Remnant: Twenty One (WIP) [April Announcement 4/11/2024] [Word Count: 225,948 Words!]

Just played upto chapter 4 and i really loved the storytelling and writing. It really kept me hooked to the story throughout… especially chapter 4. Excited for more of this xD

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I liked the story, I found it very original, besides being pleasant and the characters are interesting.

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Thank you so much! I’m happy that you were engaged with the story :grin: Chapter 4 is probably my most favorite chapter I’ve written.

Thank you thank you! I’m glad that you liked the story and are interested in the characters :partying_face:

Ohh, finally an update :heart_eyes::smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

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Interesting story so far, I have this bookmarked for future updates. Are you planning on having more RO options and a way to customize our characters? Eye color, hair ect.

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Thank you for your interest! And I do plan to have two more ROs and yes I do plan to have character customization in the future. It’s just I’m not exactly sure how to approach it since there are so many options. Thanks for reading! :grin:

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Hello everyone!
Hope you all had a happy new year! Some updates for everyone, I finished writing Chapter 5 of the story which is around an additional 13k words. It also includes an official introduction to another RO :eyes:. However, I shall not upload it just yet since it takes up half of Wednesday in the story.

I plan to write Chapter 6 which has two different versions depending on a major decision you make in Chapter 5. I plan to write Chapter 6 versions 1 and 2 hopefully by the end of January.

Also, I have a question for readers, what kind of scenarios do you eat up involving an RO?

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honestly? pretty specific to ROs that completely hate me, but i love when they start getting flustered :face_with_hand_over_mouth: i eat that shit up like it’s dinner

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also this vaguely reminds me of the manhwa “i’m not that kind of talent”

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Oooo noted :memo:

That’s pretty interesting, I haven’t read manhwa in a hot minute. The last one I read was Tower of God, but hopefully this comparison is a good comparison haha

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dw it’s a good comparison

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Yoo, this has been in my list for reading later for a while, and with free time, I decided to finally read it. I literally kept screaming and laughing in so many scenes, the scenes always brought a sense of emotion and it’s just so good. And I love the main idea of this whole story

Im already so attached to every character, especially big bro :'))) IM STILL SAD HE WASN’T ACTUALLY ALIVE AND WAS REAL AND JUST HAD SOME KIND OF THIRD EYE THAT MAKES HIM KNOW WE GOT TRANSFERRED TO A NEW DIMENSION, DOES THAT EVEN MAKE SENSE???

This story is so so beautiful, I literally can’t put into words how much entertainment and happiness this whole story gave me. It gave me such an easy time to imagine what’s going on and I can so easily picture the reactions and emotions its so goooooddd im gushing so much

Thank you author for sharing this, it’s such a lovely story and I hope to go through this whole journey <<<3333

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jokebearcrying
Oh my god, your comment was so nice! I literally screamed after I read it and laid on the floor just to process it haha! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR READING, I’m very happy that my story was able to give you a rollercoaster of emotions, and THANK YOU AGAIN for the encouraging words! And yes, big bro is best character :laughing:

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February Update
Okay, so I may have hit a road bump near the end of January. Long story short, life got pretty busy so I wasn’t able to write much. However, now I have lots of time to write, so I’m almost done with Version A with Chapter 6. After that, I’ll have to write Version B of chapter 6.

One thing I’d like to say is that Version A and Version B will be completely different from each other. It’s a fork in the story rather than a variation. Maybe I shouldn’t call them versions. Anyway, I’d like to give an estimated date, but I’m not exactly sure when I’ll have the chapters ready. Maybe I’ll add Chapters 7 and 8 in the next update. We shall see. Also, yes, the romance can start during Chapter 6 for those who are curious. Thanks for reading this update and I’ll see you next time!

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Everyone, I have finished Chapter 6A and have decided to update my story for everyone to read this upcoming Friday! Initially, the plan was for me to finish both chapter versions, but after seeing Chapter 6A become around 25k words, I thought it would be nice for my readers to have some form of content. Anyway, for anyone who has not read my story, I advise you to not read “Twenty-One” until I update it. Thank you for reading this, see you Friday!

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UPDATE IS OUT!
jokebear

Hello everyone,
I am happy to announce that Chapters 5 and 6A have been released! I hope you enjoy it! I don’t want to say much about the new stuff, so I’ll put it in a spoiler blurb below. Also, character customization has been added, although it is quite simple. Other than that, feedback about bugs is always appreciated! Good luck out there! Thank you for reading :] (Also you might not want to rely on old save states since I added new variables)

New Features

The new mechanic I have introduced in Wednesday’s content is character death. A character you go with in Chapter 6A can die and have a different effect on the story. If you would like a guide on how to have the character killed or saved, please let me know. I don’t think I made it too difficult to figure out.

Note: I despise cliffhangers, so I have included some extra content from Chapter 7 to see the aftermath of chapter 6A.

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Wheee! An update! As much as I’m happy, I’ll have to put it off till next, next week after my exam days :cold_sweat: I’ll be coming to read all the goodies you’ve written soon author >:DDD

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Don’t worry about it, the book will still be here next week! Good luck on your exams :+1: Your excitement for my story means a lot, so thank you!

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I love the demo, Keep it up <⁠(⁠ ̄⁠︶⁠ ̄⁠)⁠↗

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Thank you :blush: I’m glad you enjoyed it!