Seems to be a coding error…was playing as a wisp from Chapter 1 to 8 who chose the Hearthwarden and somehow became a dragon in Chapter 9 and I would suggest combining a few of the chapters to make them bigger and fine-tune the pacing but if you as the author deem this as best for the story then so be it.
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I’ll fix that later this week. Sorry folks.
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All the paths I tried: skeleton, goblin, slime (and dragon, but that was hopefully intentional)
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Found a bug on the dragon path, it says I’m wingless even though I chose to have wings.
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Thanks! I’ll have that fixed in about 2 days. I’m logging all the fixes I need to do and then will have time to update it all on Wednesday. So I might have it tomorrow.
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I had the opposite problem and chose no wings but during the combat with the bird if you choose the wrath option it says one of your wings is hurt and later it says that you fly down from the mountains
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So far I played demon so. ( will play the others after) I like it a lot. My pfp answers that question why. Mc’s like akaza are my favorite tipes. No magic, no weapons, just hands. Hoping for more kicking techniques for well rounded brawler. I’m glad that we get Ro’s of different races. Makes the world more full than before where every ro was human that would be fine but with other sentient races it just felt like the village was just the only place with only human not even a elf.
- What do demons normally look like? Are they pale skined with snow white hair? Is mc hair snow white or do we get to change along with hair length? Is the most common spot for the light on the chest? Can the death eyes like arlecchino from genshin impact be added for the skeleton and demon? (Haven’t played skeleton yet so dont know whats been added) Can we control height? I don’t wanna grow to tall. It’s fun being the little monster that dumb and over confident underestimate but the smart and sees the hungry bloodlust in mc’s presence and becomes wary.
Ask because the appearance of the common demon wasn’t really described. We don’t know how a demon normally look so it’s hard to mentally picture them. All we know is that they glow and that they’re half a body taller than teller tha Mc at the start. What even is the average height for a demon? 5’8? Do there heights differ?
- Ash> Can there be a info slot for Ros? We dont know much of anything of them. All we get is that they’re is like veins. Are the veins normal? What do they look like? Does the height, hair length differ with each gender? What’s there personality exactly? We don’t get any time to actually talk to them. No romantic options, no choices to get to know them, nothing . It would nice to get that and better descriptions of the Ros.
- The dog/wolf> can we name, form some type of mental bond link, and grow him into a horse sized wolf? The bond link can let us give commands to him mentally, having him grow to war wolf size on command or stay normal size for reconnaissance and allows you to see what he sees.
- Last then the dialog between the different people talking needs to be separated better. So many times where I can’t tell who’s talking because the quotation marks weren’t used enough. The conversations just fused together. And add a glossary for power ranks. I was getting confused
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I love almosteverything in this story and everything in it. The only thing I don’t like is at the end of the demo. Regardless of what we are, we turn into a dragon for some reason. Like your a brawler demon them. The next minute your sprouting wings
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Was just about to mention that, played goblin and Bam, suddenly I’m a dragon
Great game though, always a sucker for isekai and this has a ton of super cool variety
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I will be done today with the 7 chapter demo and the fixes per your feedback and uploading around like 9 pm EST
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I lied. I forgot Love Island is out so 10:30 pm I’ll have it ready
It’s live and updated folks!! Tell me what you think!
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Should be fixed now
This is me tagging for future gameplay
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Only the demon and dragon options are popping up and attempting to continue with dragon gives and error saying “chapter1 line 285: increasing indent not allowed, expected 0 was 2”
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Fixed!