Let’s make this official - Raven’s Flight and Hunter’s Sacrifice are back. Raven’s Flight got updated first because I just had to finish the interviews first.
What can you expect in the next update:
Meeting Fox and Bull
Learning more about the trials (and your companion)
Interrogate B about their team (as per @howlin_drak suggestion)
I should probably mention that Joker and Chaos are not the same person, but you will be able to meet both in-game (albeit in a different situation).
I am curious though: who are the characters you are most eager to interact with?
@Maria_Winfield Hi! Thank you for your kind words Looking forward to seeing you on Tumblr!
@TheZod It is insane and it is back! I am planning on reopening Hunter’s Sacrifice in a couple of weeks - when I get an update in. So the heart attack will have to wait Great seeing you again. Hope you liked the small-ish update!
@HuiHui Thank you for the comment. It’s good to be back
@Arcane_warrior you will be able to overthrow the other chancellors and take control of the Homeland, but the story probably won’t get into what happens after. It won’t be easy to defeat Fox and Bull though.
I’ve missed talking with you, and reading your fascinating WIPs! I thought you were probably gone for good, so I’m happy to see you back. Hope life is treating you well.
Looking very much forward to see both Raven’s Flight and Hunter’s Sacrifice continue!
I like your planned stuff of teasing B and stalking A but what about also… Teasing A? I feel like that’s be really cute to see ;w;
Anyways love seeing the wip so far! Curious to see joker again too owo
Edit: I feel like I’d be playing sort of the fox like, no need to reveal your whole hand and all in due time sort of character. Very suspicious but you can’t exactly pin any crimes on them LOL
Welcome back kirakana! It’s so great to see you again! I was finally able to check out the update in between assignments and wow, it’s been a while since I’ve done this heh.
Typos & Stuff
Missing two possessive determiners and an article: *“…duck their head and pull in their shoulders in a vain attempt…”
*“Zero flinches at the mention of the dead hunter.”
*grieves
*“No sooner does A leave the Hunting Divison, than B slips in.”
*If
*“you ascend” or “you make your ascent”
*ways
*off
*I noticed this in the dialogue about A as well, but I wanted to ask if you meant to use the article “the” (as in “the captain”) or if your usage of the possessive determiner “your” (in “your captain”) was intentional? It’s interesting narrative-wise, implying that Raven/MC view B as a tool for their goals and/or aligning with the collective perspective of the Society (at least in my interpretation aha).
A coding issue that I noticed in the stats page! The Influence and Telepathy skills increase by 20% when I check the Side Stories section and go back to the stats page via the Personal Data option. But they return to normal if I return to the game and then check the stats page again. Not really sure what’s happening there because code is confusing hah.
The story already starts off with a mystery, but the intrigue is amping up I’m looking forward to seeing A’s activities after the meeting in HS! Also, I didn’t realize just how much B respected Raven! It’s an interesting contrast to their treatment of A. But I’m glad to see they don’t dislike everyone on Team A And thanks to Zero, we got an embarrassed B, as a treat hehe!
I’m getting the vibe that B might be in love with Raven.
It must be hard working back on forth between two different perspectives, making sure that all the variables are right for the two games. Congrats on ur turn. No wip deserves to die.
Just a suggestion, but maybe you could give the option for the player to input A’s/Raven’s stats from the other game and have some of their dialogue/actions be based on that?
Edit: Or even allow the player to choose their major decisions, as long as the player has already played the other game (or is okay with spoilers).
Also, this is now one of my favourite games here, so good job Author-san
Looking forward to seeing you on Tumblr!
Great seeing you again. Hope you liked the small-ish update!
I was finally able to check out the update in between assignments and wow, it’s been a while since I’ve done this heh.
I’m looking forward to seeing A’s activities after the meeting in HS! Also, I didn’t realize just how much B respected Raven! It’s an interesting contrast to their treatment of A. But I’m glad to see they don’t dislike everyone on Team A 
And thanks to Zero, we got an embarrassed B, as a treat hehe!
and thank you for sharing your excitement!
