Pride and Prejudice (work in progress)

[quote=“RedRoses, post:20, topic:5677, full:true”]
I think good stats could be something like “Introversion vs Extroversion”, where you can choose to make Lizzy shy and withdrawn ala Mary, or outspoken and flirty like Lydia or"Tradition vs Modern", where you can decide just how much Lizzy follows the rules of society and such.[/quote]

This is a good idea! I hadn’t though of specific traits for the game, but back then there was a lot based on the reputation of a woman. Intelligence is a common stat, as is willpower. People also tend to make stats to show how much each character likes you, such as:

Darcy 50 .

[quote=“lost_gamer, post:15, topic:5677”]
Forcing Bingley on the players not only makes for a bad game, but it’s also inaccurate to the book.[/quote]

[quote=“shettiejw, post:19, topic:5677”]
I actually think having Bingley there as a potential option makes for an interesting choice. It makes it seem more like an unexplored choice in the story, rather than this game being just a strict adaptation of the book.[/quote]

The idea that my “mother” was pushing me to go for Bingley didn’t bother me so much, it was more things like, no matter how I acted to Darcy he will always love me, no matter what I say or do the outcome feels the same with Collins. I could be the biggest jerk/turn off and people would still love me and feel attracted to me.

As for Bingley, I agree with shettiejw that he’d be an interesting choice, but I think I tried to get with him throughout the story for the purpose of screwing Jane over ('cause I wanted to be mean like that).

But then, I think that’s the problem with not having stats, without stats you’re not tracking anything unless the choice is a branching one, so unless the choice branches off the story and goes it’s complete on separate route it might as well be a *fake_choice

Despite those minor problems, I plan to keep track of this game 'cause it seems pretty cool!

A great story, I’ll say! I definitely think you should continue writing it! Though maybe give us a bit more romantic options perhaps.

I love this so much!! I hope you guys continue it! And I agree with Emmelienxd, more options would be awesome, but it’s your call! :smile:

Very excited to play this demo - Jane Austen is my spirit animal.
Looking forward to seeing the game progress. Don’t have anything else to contribute right now that hasn’t already been mentioned. Keep up the great work!

Diana and I have a meeting this weekend, so we’ll discuss which stats to put in the game. Thanks, everyone!

I guess it’s not obvious, but the game has a “nice to Collins” mode, that you can trigger in his chapter (Chapter 3). If you trigger it, you have nice responses to him for the rest of the game. If not, all your responses have a twinge of meanness to them. We will definitely switch this over to stats in the next update; it’s kind of unfair that the player is stuck with nice or mean options, for the entire game, based on one or two choices.

Now that you mention it, it’s funny how the men in the book love the heroine, even when she’s mean to them. Guys are weird like that.

The story branches off into three different directions in Chapter 6, one for Darcy, one for Collins and one for Wickham. (The branch for the Bingley pathway is in Chapter 5). That’s part of the reason we did the demo up to this point–we want to get all the issues resolved before getting into the complicated multi-branch story!

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I’m really like what you guys have so far I can’t wait til the male storyline is started but I did find it funny when I chose male that you put now imagine you had a sex change

Seems like a good game!

[quote=“lost_gamer, post:25, topic:5677”]
Now that you mention it, it’s funny how the men in the book love the heroine, even when she’s mean to them. Guys are weird like that.[/quote]

Well, I won’t disagree with you there. I could see Darcy still liking you when you’re a beezie to him, I’d see Collin being put off a little. Not that you have to follow what I’m saying! I was just hoping that we wouldn’t be ale to get the guys no matter what we say/do to them.

The writing of this is rather fantastic! I hope to see more in the future.

LOOK AT THAT BUMP
Seriosuly though, don’t necromance threads. It gets them closed.

@Cat_Raider The thread is only 25 days old…

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