Poisoning the steel mind -a wip

How come I always get an error pop up after I choose an enhancement is it just me?

@Kronos can you explain more men woman also you try the last link?
Edit: Fixed a line of code it was out of line thanks

Ya I tried the latest one and it still says something’s wrong with line 43

strange works fine for me i try in anotare browser @Kronos Fixed!! a point bad placed sor i hope You like the game is only the intro and there are other two paths find the army and wolf path

Thanks an cant wait for an update but the charm enhancement is still a little buggy

is the random dice sometimes you die somethings you got a upgrade @Kronos also I still doing new scenes I hope finish the prologue and post it this weekend I hope you like the other paths too and woman are diferent if you want to see more of the game

I love the references to " brave new world" but I think the steril people were called free martins. They were not hermaphrodits, and I thought it said somewhere in the beginning that everybody was steril anyways.

@Cagye_bee yes, if you see the lore in holopedia everyone is sterile in my game but the sterility in hermaphrodite are Diferent is a thing you understand later in the game I don’t want to spoiler now :-)) and like in brave new world the hermaphrodites could have beard and the sterility in men and woman impossibility corporal hair they are bald for a reason they have to use genetic stuff to even have hair so they envy hermaphrodites badly.

but you understand things better later in the game :slight_smile:

Ok thank you.

But the other part of what I was saying was the free martins in brave new world weren’t hermaphrodites at all. They were just sterile women, hermaphrodite means both male and female reproductive organs. Which is almost the opposite of yours where they don’t function.

@Cagye_bee I’m Spanish and have no idea what are free martins? in the Spain traduction of brave new world Un Mundo Feliz they are called Hermaphrodites and described like sterile woman with functional organs but a little tendency to bear, I read the book like 1000 times, are woman who receive a masive amount of testosterone making her sterile so I kno how the T gender work. Anyway, this isn’t brave new world, Is Pangea society almost 3000 years after and genetical reprograming is really more Advanced than that.

They are Hermaphrodites sorry I really cant continue without spoilers :-)) believe me you would understand later in the game.

I’m sorry if I seem like I’m pushing this point and being rude. It very well could have been that in my publishing of the book they changed it from hermaphridite but the modern use of the word means being both genders, a hermaphridie can not be female . the definition of hermaphridite seems like it might me lost in translation
Sorry for wasteing your time on this minor problem. I love your game and have played most of the paths.

no problem remember is a book of 1931 so definitions could change of meaning . Anyway you don’t see rude to me maybe a little demanding :-)) the name could be more accurate or not you will see.

also if you don’t read 1984 the other dystopy I used like reference read is a blow your mind book and the inspiration of the army path

I have 1984 siting In my room, trying to finish game of thrones and girl who kicked the hornets nest first.

hermaphrodites are not sterile women…as you stated @Cagye_bee. they may be both genders but should be free to choose which they identify as while either making use of both parts or not.

in real life of course is that way, but we aren’t talking about It now this is a fictional universe .
today I will put online the end of the army prologue with the selection of trainings ready to the first chapter.maybe I do something more but I don’t promise anything :slight_smile:

UPDATE
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/128296360/Poisoning/poisoning/mygame/index.html

The army path male prologue finish please post your stats and what training you choose.

Flippin awsome.
But it needs moar music tracks.
Still awsome.
I love it.
Oh! And the text effects? Bloody amazing.
I can’t wait for the next installment.

@marajade I actually managed to pick a hair color an avatar then I ended up working in a lab ;o

dot assassin you pick the scientific path I have to put where path is in game or something to clarify probably when I end the prologue I rewrite the first part to make easy to understand where you ended
edit add a explanation in choices to where path you will end

Any progress?