Not to sound mean or anything, but i been trying to read the story, and it’s like i can’t. It’s confusing and hard to follow. Especially in the beginning, it felt like a lot of the dialouge was repetitive.
@Queen_Zelda That’s great. Thank you for your words. I’m always happy to read you. I’m writing faster than before so I’m sure this time it won’t take me as long to share new content with you. And I’m excited for you to choose how to react to whatever happens later at the party. You’ll be able to decide how to feel about the whole thing, from getting mildly hurt, feeling betrayed, annoyed, and getting mad at one person, or almost everyone there (including M).
@kb12 Hi! No worries, you didn’t sound mean at all.
But could you elaborate a bit more on what feels the most confusing? I did try to use Italics to differentiate the events of the past. The present moment occurs at the party when there’s already a mess to deal with. Everything else is in the past, some scenes are more recent than others though.
And I’ll check the repetitive dialog you mention too, if you have a specific example about it that would help me too. Thank you for commenting about your experience, every little thing helps.
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Hey there!
First of all, thank you very much for your love and patience. Uff, I’m a bit late but I finally updated the demo. I tried to test as much as possible, but there could still be errors, so please let me know if something doesn’t work for you.
Also, there are still some changes to make but I wanted to ask you if the rewrites improved the story’s pacing before doing that.
PS: I’ll probably have added a few more things by late January.
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It doesn’t matter wether i steal or take a picture of the coaster it gives me an error saying startup line 1872: bad label.
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It should work now. Thanks for telling me! I hope you don’t run into any more errors. 
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I hear Sims 4 music in my head while playing
I really liked it, and no errors, a little mistake with the word ‘hisself’ (you mean himself 
) I can’t wait for the failed party 
and what happened afterwards 
Just to make you aware, Dashingdon hosting will be closing soon so I would recommend moving this to cogdemos or uploading a compiled html file:
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Thank you! I’ll be sure to change it to cogdemos.
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@Lord_Hezam Is that a good thing or should I be worried? lol
@Queen_Zelda Oops, that’s embarrasing. Do you remember where you saw it?
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I will look at it and report back then 
Dude, it’s such a great thing! It’s been ages since I’ve played a chill game like this. By all means, keep going! I can’t wait to see the full game come to life!
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