Queer’s an adjective not noun. Used as a noun it’s generally offensive and dehumanising. So if you were to use it, generally it’d be “is he queer?” BUT I’d also strongly advise against using that, since queer’s a tricky word. While there has been a great effort by some GBLTQ people to reclaim it, there’s also people who still see it as a pejorative. So you’re generally best to err on the side of not using it, unless someone specifically tells you that they are queer, or you’re using it to identify yourself.
And as I said, just use “is he gay?” Note, that’s “gay” and not “is he a gay”.
This is great so far! The dialogue seems natural, especially coming from someone who often has trouble expressing themselves verbally. The dynamic between the 2 mains is adorable. I loved how respectful the MC was towards Anzu/Anya being intersex, especially the line “Just tell me how to fuck you without hurting you, ok?” (at least I think that was it). Anyway, can’t wait for future updates and keep up the great work!
Ahh, thank you very much! Updates should come soon, I’m reworking things a bunch, to make the flow of the game clearer and putting in foreshadowing for later events, which … aren’t in this version but will be in the next one.
