Mind Blind (01/31 Demo Update. A Story Where You Are NOT The Chosen One!)

This game never stops with its twists! Twists and more twists! All the twists!

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Pass me a brownie! Lol

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I love this story, I cannot predict what will I get. The author can fucked us up everytime they got an update :skull:

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Loving the banter b/w Nick and MC in her head lol.
Sad that the chapter ended so soon :sob: I just want this entire story, tbh lol

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Also, question: HOW THE FREAK DO YOU MEET NOH? I KEEP TRYING AND FAILING.

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Take the metro.

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Yeah, I’ve been doing that. Is it just the kid mentioning that there was a masked person earlier? I was assuming MC actually interacts with them…

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Well…there’s a theory that the waiter from the restaurant and the nurse from the hospital are actually Noh in disguise. If you believe that, you do interact with them, just that your MC doesn’t know about it.

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nick im practically begging pls stop the jokes im in tears
also if i dont pick the option that i have crush on sally earlier and let her met nick in hospital does that lock me out of her route forever bc i just fell in love with her at this scene

edit: also i dont like the thoughts that the suspicious nurse has access to nick body in hospital

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Um those visions?!?! Dear god what are you going to do to us :sob:

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Those visions sure are nasty, the only thing I got from them are:

Summary

Kent: K got into trouble simple enough…
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Grayson: Button did something and Gray is calming them down which is why he’s calm.

Glitch: The mask is Noh and they were planning to kidnap Button, but Button ran away.

Rosy: Rosy ask Button to secretly help them on something that could potentially endanger Button.

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I just got the idea that what if when we see the visions, based on our stats we could deduce what happened. Like when an insightful Button hears it they’ll be able to get a lot of clues from the visions.

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@M.Agil.R_HRP I don’t think Button actually saw the visions, Sally was the one who saw it and we only heard her description of what she saw

On one hand there’s those visions, on the other hand Jo didn’t left us at another big, nasty cliffhanger - so everything’s balanced out and I’m zen for this update

I don’t remember if the propose to glitch part has been there since the start, but gosh I love Button/Glitch interactions. And the rosy bit with Sally! I especially laughed out loud at

this bit:

I just can hear it in my head and I can hear that particular Button of mine groans because her parental figure just showed disapproval at her crush ā€œchoicesā€ (but like, u can’t help that??? :joy:)

and i think I found a typo

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Always being left on the knife’s edge with these updates lately, lol. And what the heck, Glitch?

Also, typo:

typo

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Ooh, we get to locked our ro route in the next Chapter?? Nice!
Did we get to locked our personality as well? Again, no pressure just curious. :eyes::eyes:

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Found this thing.

Another thing, my MC really dislikes his family, even called his father John at the restaurant, yet later on back in the house he calls him dad which feels… weird. Just a thought.

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Oh yeah, I live for the awkward love triangle.

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Umm what is that prediction Jo… i dont like it Jo…why did sally say we cant change future Jo… I GOT SO MANY QUESTIONS!

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Seems at least some of my theories may be correct either Nick is using the portion of the mc’s brain used to shield that the mc may have failed to properly connect in the womb or hosting two conscious minds provides a data overload to even level 10 telepaths. Either way my mc doesn’t want this new ability gone.
Ideally he could retain whatever fixes hosting Nick inadvertently made to his brain. And should Nick not be able to leave again, well my mc wouldn’t object to sharing custody of his body, as being able to live a fulfilling, adult, life half of the time is better than having to live like he’s 10 years old forever.
After being able to finally have some privacy my mc really will kill himself if he had to go back to how things were before. :persevere:
This new condition opens up all the avenues that were closed before he could start to dress less nondescript, start having an actual, adult, social life…a car of his own (well maybe not the latter, unlike Kent, Nick and Grayson in spite of coming from a rich family the mc probably has no money or trust fund to obtain fancy clothes or a nice car with and it would take an aeon to save it up through his job).

I do agree with the other poster about the mc suddenly calling John ā€œdadā€ as that is something he hasn’t been in a long time or ever to my mc. In fact I think my mc’s ā€œnicknameā€ for his father when he was still living at home was ā€œwardenā€ as in prison warden.
My mc also wouldn’t volutarily blab to his father about Nick, at least not without much more internal arguing with Nick. So, yeah, that is it in terms of feedback I feel like resentful and reluctant mc who don’t like their father, like mine, could benefit from a bit more internal arguing with Nick before telling John anything. I imagine that even without the use of his lost puppy dog eyes Nick could talk/threaten my mc into revealing his new condition to John as it has been established my mc is one of those who cannot stand mopey Nick and would do anything to avoid Nick turning into mopey Nick, especially inside his own head now.

Also ā€œdoctorā€ Amari makes me think of a certain Fallout character. :laughing:

This bit did have me chuckle:

You sigh. Look, if you aren’t interested in Sally, I’ll give up. Speak now or forever hold your peace.

Especially since now that my mc is messing with Nick and Sally I do expect Nick to retaliate by messing with the complicated mess that is my mc’s ā€œrelationshipā€ā€¦or lack thereof with Gray. :sweat_smile:

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typo

ā€œI didn’t get why Elliot was so happy about burnt hockey pucks in her ugly lunchbox,ā€ MC is a he

Infatuation isn’t the same as love, Button, Nick interjects When I was nineteen, I was ā€˜in love’ with Rachel Ray. stop after interjects and a space

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