Mind Blind (01/31 Demo Update. A Story Where You Are NOT The Chosen One!)

The Christmas story was so wholesome😭 Nick is precious for just going along with Button’s antics and carrying them to bed when they fell asleep! The parents obviously love Button and it makes me sad knowing what happens in the future and broke the family apart…

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I can’t wait for the next update! It really felt good to read about a character that has so many difficulties and yet is so loved, you made a really good job at showing how much the family cares for Elliot, the story about the mom left me broken hearted, she left because she was afraid of hurting her son even more, she left because of love, not because of hatred, I also think that, as the story already has mind powers in it, maybe you can make a case for the Mc in which he basically Became batman? Not in the sense of building insanely complex tools, computers, and an insanely cool car, but in the sense that his I.Q. is one of the highest in the world if not the highest, that should also be a brain related power right? So for the loss of a more ā€œfantasyā€ oriented power our Mc gains the most intelligent brain in the planet, the story is great as it is though, don’t try to make it too complex, else you lose your view of it and don’t know where to go with it anymore, also what are your personal stats and strategy? To me a confident insightful was the most enjoyable, it’s also how I am in real life, I chose interpersonal only once, it feels the least ā€œethicalā€ so manipulating people… yeah not for me, also I think ambrosia is also an insightful so extra points if you want to impress/romance her, though I immediately went for the best friend route, it’s very sweet how the relationship between our Mc and her develops, I recently lost Puma, a gray stray cat that I adopted since he was but a child, he was the best friend I ever had, slept together with me, said hi to me whenever I arrived at home, always seeked me to play and get petted, sometimes I would wake up and Puma would be hugging my leg with something I’m sure was a cat smile, I loved him, he loved me, never in my life I felt like that, humans are sometimes overrated, so it hit me very hard when he passed away, and your story was just what I needed, I’m an only child so I can’t relate to mc’s brother, but I’ve always had lots of love from my parents so I can relate to that, still, my heart still aches for my loss, reading the story about our mc’s friendship with Sally made me so happy and gave ā€œhopeā€ that such a person can be found in our lives, yet, I still chose to romance her, because if I ever met a woman like that, I for sure would try to stay with her, forever, as a partner.

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Santa ruffles your hair and gestures beneath the tree, where there’s a package suspiciously shaped like a best friend.

And now all I can think about is evil Santa putting kids in packages and sending them wherever he wishes… most probably somewhere far far away from their home (the horror!).

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I wanted there to be some replayablity despite how short the story is, so the toys you select at the beginning set stats and change some text (like how Button plans to trap Santa). I’d completely forgotten that ā€œbest friendā€ was an option when I wrote the present-you-wished-for-in-the-past appearing under the tree bit, and only discovered it when test playing. :sweat_smile:

It amused me enough that I kept it in, and my head canon is that the child-sized gift is actually a boxed pogo stick (John and Hope really tried to compensate with ā€œfunā€ presents this year, after experiencing Button’s open disgust for educational toys).

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Yeah, I was. My acceptance percent was in the high 90’s, and I don’t remember which choice it was, but it bumped me up to 102%. I know Fairmath doesn’t like numbers exceeding 0 or a 100, so I was a little concerned at that time lol.

But it’s the fact that I knew that Fairmath would be a problem at the time but didn’t realize that until long after is why I felt so dumb :joy: I literally went ā€œAH!ā€ and laughed at myself while restarting my game. It was a real scatterbrained moment of realization lmao

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Wwww this is wholesome!
Gonna name my Button Kevin, and take Scamta down as close as Home Alone style as possible :pensive::ok_hand:

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Friday Progress and Patreon Reveal!

I did it, guys!

As the new year begins, I want to thank everyone for your incredible support and feedback. I also laugh at my past self who thought it would be ā€œlike, totally possibleā€ to finish Mind Blind by January (oh, that sweet, naive summer child),

My (much more achievable) New Year’s resolution is to submit Mind Blind to Hosted Games by the end of 2021! I have over 200,000 words in my personal demo (which I started writing around six months ago), and a year should be enough time to reach my goal wordcount of 500,000 plus do an intensive edit.

Having financial wiggle room to teach only five days a week as opposed to my current six would be immeasurably helpful in completing Mind Blind, so I’ve opened a Patreon for anyone who’s interested in MB short stories and behind-the-scenes peaks! I’ll also be posting other writing that isn’t directly MB-related there (like my completed manuscript, Lady Death’s Diary ).

. . . Whew. I’ll be honest, opening a Patreon makes me nervous. I hadn’t planned to open one until MB was fully released, but I also vastly underestimated how much work goes into creating interactive fiction. It was always a mystery to me while IF wasn’t more mainstream, but now I get it. Interactive Fiction is a completely different beast than writing a novel.

Next Patreon Demo Update: January 22

Next Public Demo Update: January 31

In addition to being given access to the open demo earlier, Patreon supporters can also gain access to the closed version of the demo without becoming an official alpha tester (this will start around Chapter 10, to avoid leaking certain spoilers, like Noh’s identity, before the game releases).

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I’m not sure I’ll ever be prepared to learn who Noh is because there’s at least some level of betrayal :sob:

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I keep checking on your Patreon to see the numbers climb and I’m so jazzed. Well deserved, every patron and every cent.

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When you say ā€œsaucyā€ side stories, does that mean creatively utilized hot sauce, or…? :stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye:

Congratulations on the creation of your Patreon, and best of luck with all of your goals, especially with publishing!

Mind Blind never fails to be riveting with just the right amount of both gravitas and levity, and I look forward to seeing more of it and of your future works. :smiley:

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As someone who just jumped right into the demo without reading anything else, I’m happy to see that the premise is well-explained and very clear. Also I love the variety of responses you can give to different scenarios even if it gets hard to keep track of what is in character for you if you leave it and come back for a while. Look forward to updates!

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This may be a stupid question but who is Noh? Is it the person on the train? Is there any interaction so far with them? Also I feel like my adeptness for making make shift weapons should be much more appreciated. I’m talking to you Kim😤

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Ye, ā€˜Noh’ one know their name is exactly. Ppl just calling them Noh bc of their mask.
So far that we know they were that creepy person wearing mask in train route.
But, if they indeed the reason Nick in coma, let Noh know, I just want to talk real quick :slightly_smiling_face::hocho::hocho::hocho:

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I have a question and I hope it doesn’t sound stupid-

but what does manganous mean?

Also, I really really like the demo and I’m looking forward to the next update. Hope you have a nice new year! ^^

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It means generous, charitable, forgiving (if I’m correct-)!

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Oh I see! Thanks

I thought it was related to manga or something because that’s the first time I ever heard that word. English isn’t really my first language :sweat_smile:

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I went to bed last night, and my final thought before falling asleep was that Mind Blind has both the BFB (best friend’s brother) and the BBF (brother’s best friend) tropes, and I’m here for that.

EDIT: And the BFF trope, wow it hits all the Bs and Fs in tropes.

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@wildelight I think this should be ā€œmagnanimous?ā€

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Bug report? I say this only cause I didn’t hit Next but instead tried to load up a previous save file, so I don’t know if anyone else would get this but me. If this is just a weird bug on my end, then feel free to ignore it!

Edit:

Tried to replicate the error … and got an entirely new one?

I’m not entirely sure what could be causing both errors, but both times I tried to reload a previous save file.

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What? how did you get the chicago scene? never got anything like that in my playthroughs, is there some special condition or route?

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