Happy 15th of the month, everyone.
Iâve been focused on my rewriting for the past two weeks and have been working at a good pace, yet I still have a lot to do to meet my monthâs goals.
@Blunderbutts â Congrats on getting the WiP up, that is a huge milestone!
@WRMK , @Kwartel @Isi_Talks , and @Raven-w â It is wonderful having you post here for the first time. Welcome to the Writerâs Support thread⊠I appreciate you stepping up and posting.
@Dvalor53 and @vera â Thank you for getting this monthâs excerpt sharing under way!
This month, I will share an excerpt from my ĂmigrĂ© project:
Emigre excerpt 05-15-23
Striding down the alley with the wisp of a man next to you, you reconsider your impulsive choice that you just made. âTell me, again, what exactly I traded you my Colt Patterson pistol for again?â
âI am your agent, opening the way for you to get to California.â Interrupting himself with a wheezing cough that sprays blood-tinged phlegm your way, your agent, who you also know as Dan Halloran, continues. âIn exchange for this fine hand-gun, I will take you to interview with up to three different families, one of which you will join for the trip to California.â
âAnd why canât I just go to them myself, again?â
âYou are taking my place on the last wagon train out of Springfield this year. There is no way I will make it with the consumption hitting me so hard right now and there is no way a Johnny Come-Late would ever get the opening spot the normal way.â Spraying blood-tinged spittle across the alley-way, once more, Dan attempts to stifle the convulsions wracking his wasted frame. âYou have no choice, really. It is trust me or wait another year until the spring rolls around once more.â
Putting your hand on his shoulder, you bring Dan to a halt, allowing him time to recover his composure. âWhy is it you insisted on my Colt, instead of gold coin? That makes no sense to me.â
âLook, ${pcnoun_insult}âŠâ Looking you up and down again for the hundredth time, Dan shakes his head. âBe glad you have your health. I have all the gold and comforts I need. You saw my office and all.â
âI know, butâŠâ
âBut nothing!â Suppressing another coughing bout Dan screws his eyes at you, anger coloring his cheeks. âThe doc, uptight cuss that he is, says I have a couple of weeks left. This is just too much for me, do you hear?â Pounding his chest and then pointing to you, Dan, lowering his voice says: âA man should be able to die in dignity if he wants. Of course the old doctor refuses to give me some of his cocaine cutters or opium poppers⊠says the medicine he has should go to people that it will do good for.â
âWhy not buy your own pistol then. Or shotgun, if you prefer?â Blinking in confusion, you just donât see the problem. âEven a new pistol from Connecticut wouldnât cost you twenty-five gold dollars.â
âWell, I wanted to do some good with my life before leaving it behind. Figured a ungrateful ${origins} like you could use a break every now and then.â
âStillâŠâ
âYou want to drag the truth out of me, do you?â Sighing in resignation, with his anger and bitterness draining away, Dan finally reveals his motives to you. âThat damn doctor forbid his son-in-law, the only gun dealer with stock, to sell me any firearm. The sonuvabitch is concerned about my soul, he is.â Walking ahead of you, Dan turns and says: âWell, are you coming, or not? Iâm not giving you back the pistol. It is mine. Of course, if you miss the last wagon train âŠâ
*page_break âThatâs not happening.â
Peering out into the staging area from the mouth of the ally, you turn to Dan and make a comment. âIt truly looks deserted, Dan. Where are all the others that normally fill the staging area?â
Turning to face the old-timer, you catch him shaking his head at your ignorance. â$!{pcnoun_insult} ⊠you really are from the swamps, arenât you? The springtime is nearly over as it is now April, these damn-fools leaving today really shouldnât be doing so. As it is, there is a chance they get caught in winter storms trying to get over the Sierra Nevada mountains near the end of the journey.â Coughing up phlegm, Dan wipes his hand on the seat of his britches.
âThen why go at all? Why not wait until next year, when you are sure to make it before any winter storm approaches?â Puckering your lips, you cut your questions off, as Dan motions for you to quiet down. âWell?â Sidestepping another bout of flying spittle, you sigh at the answer he gives you.
âEveryone has their reasons. Youâll have to ask them, yourself, if you want to make it your business why they are insisting on leaving so late, just as you are.â Holding his hand out at you, palm forward, Dan forestalls any further questions by asking you which family you want to approach first. âWhich family do you want to approach first?â
Iâd like to shout out @Cecilia_Rosewood , because she has been working very hard with @Nocturnal_Stillness , to help get UnNatural Season Two ready for release.
As a backend person helping an author getting their story/game ready for publication, often these essential people do not get the recognition and the praise that they deserve. Ask any published author and they will tell you that there are people who are essential to their success.
If you are lucky enough to have such a person in your corner, take the time to tell them you appreciate them.
Last shoutout for the day goes to: @Eric_Moser â not only for the puglicious pictures, but for sharing with us his struggles to transition to full-time writing.
Many of us can feel overwhelmed at times because as @HarrisPS said earlier, what we are doing is hard.
Thank you, Eric for showing everyone that even multi-published writers can feel overwhelmed and that none of us are alone in our struggles.
Time to go back to my writing, ttyl everyone.