Lost in your eyes (WIP) [May 01 2025 Update] [5 Ch, 300K words] [Vampires/Romance/Modern Dark Fantasy]

Good luck surviving them. Also thanks for the update

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Haha, thanks! I’m trying and failing to survive em, a bit hard to juggle so many things but I’m getting a hang of it. And the day I stop updating is the day I stop working on the book (Which is only gonna happen when it’s finished XD)


Update!

While there’s nothing much to report, 3.5K were written with almost 1K words removed. The book now stands at 174.6K words.

You can be softer to Sagittarius and Kate now instead of either being harsh or letting Hayes decide for you.

Only 10K words left to edit, and make better. After that back to Femboy Dating Simulator!

This is a reminder that the book hasn’t been updated, and I’ll try my best that it’ll be ready at the end of the month. Sorry again you guys! >.< See you next week!

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Amazing its so good and i am a huge sucker for POV keep up the amazing work o3o i so want to romance Alex :heart_eyes: he so cute and protective

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Heh, you’re going to love the rewrite then! <3

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UPDATE TIME: EXAMS ARE DONE WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

So, this weekend was amazing since I did lotsa writing, I couldn’t quite do anything while the exams were going on which finished on Friday (Took a 12 hour nap since I pulled an all nighter the day before) So let’s see what we accomplished today.

About 2.5K words were added. You may be asking KATHERINE WHAT THE HELL?! WHAT’S WRONG WITH YOU? WHY ONLY 2.5K? ARE YOU OUT OF YOUR MIND? YOU USED TO WRITE 7K WORDS A WEEK, AND NOW 2.5K?! WORK WOMAN. WORK
And to that I’ll reply with Sobs profusely. But I’d also reply with “I was giving my exams :(” and if you wouldn’t say that, then dw, the voices in my head already did.

While 2.5K words were added, my goal isn’t to write as much as I can weekly, my goal is to edit, and I’m trying to make peace with myself that a good edit does not mean adding more words. It means fixing what you’ve wrote, so 2.5K is something that I’m quite proud of seeing that I edited almost 3-5K words (Only 7 or 8K words are left I think.)

3K words were edited.

7K words are left for editing, hopefully I’ll be able to be done with it this month.

That’s pretty much it, see you guys next week!

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Take a break. It’s well earned especially the stress u had with those exams.

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Haha, I’ve kept you guys waiting too long for the update, plus it’s only 7K words that need editing, once I’m done with the rewrite of the first chapter I’ll take a two days rest ^~^

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This is a writing, not a race, do it in your own pace.

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I knowww, It’s just that I have these goals that I’ve already set up and if I don’t complete them, my self conscious usually just keeps irking me to the point I can’t even sleep at night. I do promise to take some rest once I’m done with the rewrite!

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Remember Kathy, we’re more worried about you than your story.

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Y-Ya’ll are way too sweet…
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Take care yourself and be safe :heart:

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Sorry for not replying this monday! Storm kinda caused the lights to go Kaploot.

Anyways! Updates! Yes! Today! Weee (This is my being hyper energetic since I took like 2 mugs of coffee and it’s 1 am in the night. Gonna write all night :D Anyways, Imma stop before you guys see me as deranged.

  1. THE BOOK IS FINALLY BEING UPDATED! WOOO! PRAISE DA LAWD!
  2. So, The update will contain the following:
    1. Vigil is given more personality.
    1. You can interact with Hayes more, and they’re more protective. The cuddling scene is a bit more readable without me cringing at my own writing.
    1. A fun surprise in the end for all Blaine lovers <3
      The book is now up to 171K Public (I know, it isn’t much, but I did remove a lot of things, plus the rewrite took a lot out of me. Do remember that the book is still in it’s initial words, and what you’re reading is kinda the 2nd draft. (Except chapter 1, I rewrote that like a bajillion gajilifilipinolian times.)

Tha’s kinda it, I’ll be working on da Patreon version where I’m introducing another RO. So yesh!
(This will be the last RO dw.) Also I wonder when Alex/Alice is coming back. Are they dead? Or are they still alive and kicking? :thinking: :smiling_imp:

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Hooooo… You play dirty dear author… you play dirty… :sob:

…okay time for me to go read the update :kissing_heart::yum:

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It isn’t updated yet! I forgot that I forgot my dashingdon password, so I’m creating a new one >.<

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Here you go! Posting the link here for now since I need to update the whole thing and make it a bit better.

“Lost in your eyes: A Dark Fantasy Romance Book” (dashingdon.com)

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wow kathy u are definition of 9-5 it’s amazing, but make sure not to overwork yourself!
your literally doing 2 stories at the same time. Take a day off :heart: :tired_face: :two_hearts:

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I also noticed a few errors :sweat_smile:
I think you probably already know these but… idk sorry!! I think there was another but im lazy :yawning_face:



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I knowww, I promise I will! Once the Patreon version is finished, I’ll take two days off, and spend the time sleeping in and catching up to sleep (It’s 7 am now lol) But yes! I promise to sleep! (Also thanks for caring!!) >.<

Oop- I didn’t, but thanks for pointing them out! (I’m actually looking around in chapter 3 and AUGGHHH I’m gonna have to rewrite that again, for now, I’m focusing on the Patreon version of the book, but I will update tomorrow since head going ouchy)

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Heads up, in my case, the chapter 2 start went straight to, from what I recall, the gym “call guards for help/talk them down” choice

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