Life As Ruler:Nexus Island. Kingdom Simulator.450,000-Words! (Full Demo_11 Feb 2025)

At the risk of sounding like the a-hole here:

You either have an odd writing style (I’m one to talk, mine’s weird too), or this is AI.

There’s descriptions that are oddly repetitive the way you often see with AI, saw some word(ing) choices that struck me as off (though YMMV, might be stylistic/non-native english speaker)

Plus all the errors that have been reported… Sure, maybe you simply haven’t tested it (if you couldn’t because browser, it should work on firefox?) or you had ai generate the whole thing and just uploaded it

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Wouldn’t be surprised, AI is dangerously becoming more influential than ever before.

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I think based on past conversions the writing problems in this game are most likely due to the author not being a native english speaker.They have admitted to using grammarly before, so that could be part of the problem as well. All the author needs to do is fix the errors and have someone proofread the game.

I don’t personally think ai was used to like make up the concept of the game (you never know though) and it seems like this game even before was the type to have multiple errors.

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No matter what I do I can’t seem to get past chapter 1.

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I can’t stop being a sperm
keeps giving this error

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I always keep getting error when I try to swim as a sperm. The only path that works is the one where you fail.

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Hie fellow forumers, thank you for playing, though you couldn’t get anywhere.
I will be frank, English is not my first language. My writing speaks for itself.
As for AI generation or grammarly, none of those have been used in this story.

The error you have all been encountering seems to be can’t fall out of an *if or else commands. I don’t have that error on my device. I tested the game offline and never got to do it online.

Please bear with me as I try to solve the errors. For the record, on my end not online, the games goes beyond Chapter 1, 2 and 3.

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Anyone online, I just fixed those errors you mentioned. Turns out there is a command I left out in the code.

Please, I need to know if it’s fixed on your end.

My time online is limited so if I don’t reply or fix an error, that’s probably the issue.

I have to admit, the part where some of my writing is suspected to be AI generated? That kinda hurt. I never visited any AI generating websites, nor do I have a related app.

Anyway, if there are any grammar errors I would appreciate if you explicitly mention them.
For a native speaker, your feedback will help improve my writing. God Almighty really did a good number for us at the Tower Of Babel. If I use my own language on this line, you wouldn’t know what I wrote without using a translation program.

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Solved on my end, though i got the earlier ending xD hahaha

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I hope there are no code errors onward.

I would like to know how many times you went through to get that first achievement.

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Sorry to say but I’m still having this problem

If it helps I went with
Identical twins,Swim safe and keep,At the middle and smaller opening.

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Good luck with this! I wanted to follow this but forced romance is a no-no for me. Still wishing you the best.

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i mean if your talking about the thing with jaime? the character from the other boat it doesn’t last.

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the contraceptive is fixed. but and the first love’s gender keep getting swapping
haven’t get far into the story yet… because the management got my head spinning lol

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Typos and bugs


Should be Off


Should be chieftain of the

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Not correctly indented


Maned?


Can’t trigger the extra dialogue cause perception is only at max 30 so check can’t be passed


Subjugation


The variables are definitely not correctly set please fix this one

I’ve only played until the landing because of the gender bugs with your love interest it really breaks the immersion so I will wait till it gets fixed

But overall I love the plot of the story and really think I will like this wip very much. Hope you are doing fine author

Also little nitpick what is the purpose of the ~ after every speech?

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So far after being able to play myself i’ve gotten maybe 3 months or so into managing my people, but there are a couple of things that are preventing me from making progress. First, you can’t pay your workers even if you have the money to do so. Second, you can’t make stone blocks.(i’m just gonna cheat some in. Sorry) I haven’t seen any indication that you can do either.

I’m not sure if I’m missing something, but I hope the update doesn’t mess the saves up.

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I love your game

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Got my dragon eggs but I can’t go my home

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I am one of the readers who hate being forced into something. It’s just @kb12 said.

Thank you Randomguy for the feedback. I will look into it. Though, I don’t know when I will be able to fix it.

About ~, if it’s bad for writing, reading or something, I will remove it.

As for those who got to Chapter 3, I hope I can fix that error. It’s good to see there are no code errors upto that point.

Like I said before, my time online is limited, so errors might not get fixed as soon as I would like.

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I think it’s about stored cache on your browser. To fix it, just delete your browsing history of the game. Just the game. It might work.

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