It’s not an issue. I actually did get the meaning, but I still double-checked the story to see if I was wrong.
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I’ll fix it, thanks! ^^
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Damn it…I’m having a bit of trouble fixing that. 
I’ll figure it out though…thanks!
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Just out of curiosity, do Orcs or half-Orcs exist in this universe?
Not as I planned it, sorry. 
Well that might be interesting but as i’m aware we already have pretty enough antagonists, and fitting the orcs in the story would take a lot as well. So i’m not sure if i even would like to see it 
I love Orcs too. And will probably include them in one of my later projects. ^^ But as far as LoO goes…I don’t think they ‘fit in’.
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I was wondering @Tanja.K, are the chapters very different in length?
You said in that other thread that this game will be very long, but so far the chapters posted have felt rather short, and with the chapter list in the beginning of the game, that seems like a short game, unless the later chapters are much longer. 
The chapters are only short or long based on your choices…
Though, I feel like the warrior’s origin (were you love a family member instead of spouse) IS short. So if you’ve played that…you have a reason for saying the following. And btw - it will be all fixed by the end.
However, rogue’s chapter 2 was painfully long for example…played yet? At least, it’s very long if you pick certain dialog/actions…
Also, i’m sorry if (this) comes out wrong but I can’t help but to feel as though you’re trying to pin me as a ‘lier’. for whatever reason… 
This is your second post, a completely different topic, yet, you go for something else that would make it seem like i lied.
And there will be about …12? I think, chapters in my story. (10ch min) That’s long, even if they were as ‘short’ as the one i mentioned. At least, long as far as CG go. Or the ones /I /played.
BTW: If you really DO feel even the rogue’s chap 2 is short (for example, which is meant to be the longest yet) I’ll …fix everything up and make it longer. Somehow. I really think it’s long though…? It’s more then just a chapter. It has over 600 lines. Not words, tons more words but 600 lines in notepad ++ or more…lemme check actually!
639 lines, yes.
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Oh wait, since lines mean little , depending on how you type stuff…lemme screen:
I can see why you would feel like that.
Don’t worry I don’t have any sort of agenda with the questions. I just get confused when my experience doesn’t seem to match someone else’s, and I’m in a mood currently where I just ask about it, instead of letting it bother me without saying anything, as I usually would.
I can stop if it’s a problem?
Or I can send you a PM, so we can talk more in private?
It’s fine if you have questions…but when you publicly hint someone’s a ‘liar’ there tends to be a problem.
I hope you understand that…I’ll PM you after lunch though. Hopefully, we can sort this out and be friends, or fellow writers/readers after this - at the very least.
I was thinking about Orcs as a playable race actually, not just mooks. I had to ask since I love them so much.
But in any case, LOO seems very promising and I’m excited to see how it turns out.
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Thank you! ^^
I have a project in mind where Orcs will be included though…so stay tuned! 
I hope, till then, you enjoy one of the…5 I think? Playable races I have.
After my chat with @The_Lady_Luck, I realized my story isn’t going to be as long as I imagined it would be…while for a book, the length of my chapters would be pretty reasonable , it just doesn’t work that way in a choice game, where some of the choices lead to the whole chapter to be 400words long for example, instead of 2500…
Because of this, I’ve decided to add the sequel (which would be the second in the series) inside the game as well. The game, the story, will now be split into two parts after the prologue.
First part being “The Cursed Ones” , and second part being “The Old Gods”.
This will also mean the demo will be what was meant to be the whole first game, and the game in whole will be 50% longer (in a certain matter of looking at it lol. It may be more like 48 or 62%…you get the idea though! XD)
I hope you’re all happy to hear this, and make sure to thank @The_Lady_Luck, for this new update! ^^
AS ALWAYS! … ;
- Thanks for reading!
with lots of love, Kirsten.
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Btw, @Tanja.K, I really appreciated how you put the link to the story in the update posts.
It was nice not having to scroll back to the first post to get to the game. 
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Here’s one more so that people don’t have to scroll up at all, lol.
… I find it pretty easy to scroll on this site. XD But still!
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I sometimes have problems with the quick-scroll thingie on the side disappearing, and having to scroll up for quite a while before it reappears.
Ah, i see…mobile problem? I’m on a PC, and my phone broke not too long ago so…don’t feel the mobile pain. Lol.