Law-Abiding Citizens (WIP) -- Updated 23/08/18 (HUGE HIATUS)



Thank you! I’m so glad you liked it, it’s good to see that my hard work does pay off. I’ll fix it in mere moments.
If you see anything else that seems wrong, please tell me. I would be internally grateful! :smile:


You’re not going to tell us?





“I know, I’ve there before remember?”

I’ve been there

You had no idea Felix was involved in any way, he was the smartest and riches gang-leader you knew.


“-working here?” A woman’s voice, and sharp echoes of heels.
“Just quit then, why won’t you?” Another woman’s voice, this one with a heavy accent. You very silently peeked through the slit of the stall’s door. You could see the two women, hurriedly applying makeup as they examined themselves in the bathroom’s mirror.

Erm… I’m in Men’s room


Thank you! I will fix these mistakes.

As for the last one, I’m sorry If I was misleading when writing it but the MC enters a unisex bathroom. Which means any genders are allowed.


Ah okay must be a bug from my side then…gotta run Diagnostics on my eyes

I’m one of them machines :imp:


It’s alright! It’s the thought of helping that counts :grin:

I swear I have nothing against the machines ‘-’


GUYS NEW CHAPTER IS OUT! Trevor’s chapter four, check it out!

I also have a tumblr now, so feel free to poke me there ^-^ :

I love you all :heart:


Next on chopping block is Serena right?


was trying the demo…

Got: chapter 1 line 2: Invalid use of curly smart quote:(there is a straight line here) , use straight quote ‘’ instead


Yes Serena will be next ^^


I don’t get this error when I try to play the game, could you try again and if it’s still there can you take a screenshot please.

Thank you!


I’m always happy to help…

But…for some reason , the extensions I have to take screenie on my browser (chrome) , do take a screenie…but the error isn’t showing .

Btw…a new try and got a new error : saveMod: Second argument must be true or false .



You mean this error ? I’m getting it too ;-;


that’s the 2nd one I got , yeah thanx!


Found little bug at the end of prologue, but besides that story has potential.

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Alright! Thank you all of you I think I know what’s causing this, I will fix it straight away. I’ll come back to update you all on the issue.

Thanks again beautiful people~


It should be working now, I tested it just to make sure and everything seems alright!

Do tell me if more error show up or anything of the sorts, thank you all so much! :relaxed:


well did another run , and happy to report no issue at all! :hugs: well save…for the massive crush I’m having on serena buahaha …ahem


Thank you! Serena will be next no worries.
Hopefully I won’t die of a heart attack while writing it cause Serena is a sweetie.