Thanks @Peepee_Poopoo .
@Queen_Zelda I guess you are referring to Midori, right? 
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Yes, I think it was Midori xD
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Hi everyone! 
I just wanted to say: don’t worry. I am still here, writing and developing the story. I’ll do my best to finish it asap.
If you have feedback, hints, or encouraging words, they are very appreciated 
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Hi everyone!
Sorry I didn’t post for so long, but life’s been hectic.
Happy holiday season to everyone. I’ll do my best to post a new chapter before January.
As always, suggestions, hints, and support are always welcome!
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(This is my personal opinion)
Biggest issue I have with this is that the main character feels like an already predetermined one with their own personality and Inclinations that kinda makes our choices rather meaningless and pulls you out of the immersion that this story would have otherwise offered.
Also it takes too long to set up into the actual meat of things, that I felt like the first part/prologue was such a chore to read through that I almost abandoned moving forward.
This game has potential no doubt but it does require further work to flesh it out, keep at it.
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Just tried the demo and the resemblance to FF X is uncanny. I know that you said that it’s a tribute but the whole storyline and characters are the same, just with different names and lores. I don’t know if you are planning to monetize your game and If you do, it feels wrong cause at this point, this is a AU fanfiction. I think the whole Buddhist mythology is interesting if you make an original story out of it.
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Way to go!
I am so happy I received feedback on Christmas day! 
@Malignant_First Thank you for your opinion. I am now trying hard to “finish” the story, and then I will do my best to ‘flesh it out’ as you said. 
I will do my best to keep up with your expectations. Finally, I love your avatar. Caesar Augustus of Prima Porta is one of my favorite statues after the Laocoon at the Uffizi.
@deenabush9 Thank you very much for playing our game. I did my best to homage to FFX and am constantly striving to “surprise” fans with a different story. The more you approach the end of the story, the more it will change from the great (perhaps unreachable?) original one that inspires us. I am also doing my best to place hints and easter eggs here and there. Hence, FFX hardcore fans realize from the start that “this is not the same story” and “I wonder how this tribute will unfold and, most of all, how will this end?” Many people are helping me in this endeavor. I hope our work will meet your expectations in the end.
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How could I forget something so important?
Ladies and gentlemen, CHAPTER 11 is online for you to enjoy! Actually, I updated it yesterday, but I forgot to tell you here! 
Please forgive my lack of focus, and please give me feedback!
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Oooooh I’m so happy to see that Koji is back !!!
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Hi @Brainb, thank you very much for your help.
edit I did my best to fix the bug. Let me know if it works now.
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Yup, it’s working now, thanks so much!
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11_reunion line 682: invalid indent, expected at least one line in ‘if’ true block
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Hi everybody!
@Brainb and @Max_Jones, thank you very much for your help.
I did my best to fix both issues.
I hope everything works now.
Thank you again, everyone, for your invaluable help.
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I like your story a lot, but there are biggest problems I have had so far:
- Akira changing pronounces all the time. The reason is probably me choosing interest in both male and female
- My character having too much orthodox percentage, though I don’t remember doing something really “orthodox”… she only prayed once. I was surprised that I couldn’t cheer on partisans, despite our character being from high-tech world
Sorry for my English, hope you’ll have great day!
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Hi @eeeeewing 
Thank you for playing our game.
Sorry for the pronouns. I am not a native English speaker, so these kind of things could happen. I plan to ask some skilled people to do a proofreading when I finish writing. Hopefully, everything will be alright in the end. 
As for the " Orthodox" stat, that should represent how much your character complies to the laws and how much he obeys orders and dogmas. I should probably explain this in a better way so everything goes smoothly.
Thank you again for playing, I hope you have a great time
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You know what? Chapter 12 is up! We dive deep into the Underworld! 
Thank you, everyone, for your support!
I will do my best to keep the best possible pace.
As usual, I am looking forward to your feedback!
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