Knights Saga Revenge

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New Update — Chapter Improvements, Save System, and Chapter Four Begins

Hey everyone, I’ve made a pretty big round of updates to the game based on feedback and things I noticed while replaying and testing it.

The biggest addition is a new manual save system. You can now create your own named saves instead of only relying on the automatic save at the beginning of each chapter. This should make it much easier to return to important choices, try different paths, or continue without losing your progress.

I also went back through the earlier chapters and made several improvements:

  • Expanded and cleaned up a number of scenes

  • Improved the pacing and transitions between important moments

  • Made Thomas feel more consistent while still showing his softer and more human side

  • Added more opportunities to ask Thomas questions about his past, his knighthood, and his connection to the protagonist’s family

  • Improved the development of your friendship with Reimond or Miriam so it feels like the relationship grows naturally over time

  • Reworked some dialogue so Reimond and Miriam feel like separate characters instead of always saying the same things

  • Adjusted several stat increases so choices feel more balanced

  • Corrected character ages, heights, descriptions, and continuity issues

  • Removed or rewrote scenes that no longer fit the direction of the story

  • Fixed ChoiceScript errors and tested the current game through Randomtest and Quicktest

Chapter Three has also been expanded with more character development, training, conversations, and preparation for the protagonist’s first real mission.

The beginning of Chapter Four has now been added as well. The protagonist and their companion arrive at a small town already close to violence, where an argument between two merchant families is beginning to spiral out of control. The player will be able to decide whether to intervene, observe the situation, or handle the confrontation another way. This chapter will focus on investigation, diplomacy, player choice, and the growing fear surrounding magic.

Thank you to everyone who has read the story, left feedback, or pointed out problems. The game is still a work in progress, but these updates have made the opening chapters much stronger and brought the story closer to the direction I originally imagined.

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July 2026 Writer Support Thread
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A medieval fantasy interactive novel about survival, vengeance, loyalty, and difficult choices.

After your village is destroyed and your family murdered by bandits, you barely survive long enough to reach the estate of your estranged uncle, Lord Thomas—a hardened former knight now serving as a local lord.

Taken in as his squire, you begin brutal training to transform yourself from a traumatized survivor into someone capable of shaping their own fate.

As the years pass, you’ll forge friendships, rivals, romances, and decide what kind of person you become:

  • honorable protector
  • ruthless avenger
  • cunning manipulator
  • ambitious conqueror
  • or something in between

But the kingdom itself hides deeper problems.

Magic is outlawed.

Feared.

Punishable by death.

After the queen was murdered years ago by a mage attempting to kill the king, anyone born with magic is hunted like a monster.

very early demo

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What tips are you looking for?

Is it okay if you allowed the game to run in fullscreen instead embedded on the page? I find myself accidentally scrolling out the screen sometimes.

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Just suggestions or things that don’t quite look right/Work right also there should be a button on the bottom right of the screen that makes it go full screen

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Interesting so far the only thing I would recommend for now atleast would be to add a save system it makes it so much easier to figure out bugs

and on bugs I think there’s one after your uncle says his story about his friend after closest friend I think for some reason the end is cut off because I have no idea why there would be a “no throw your pillow” or “get dressed and do give her a reaction” decision I genuinely thought it was a decision to decide what kind of relationship you had with her :laughing::laughing:

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Thank you when I get home I’ll fix that

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ok i added a save system now and did some minor edits more to come later

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I’m going to try to update this once or twice a week again any feed back even negative is welcome

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