Iroquis Confederacy - Work-in-Progress

So I saw that this is historical and just had to try it!
While I sadly dont have that much knowledge of native people, I really like the game so far!
You can be a healer, which I as a medical personal always love, and I love when my characters can learn many languages, so thats a huge plus point. I am really interested how this will continue and how the character creatin will be!
Also, the quiz is something new and a fun way to actually learn something!

The mistakes I noticed so far, whitout playing all possible routes, I have hidden them so that these will not be too long:

Summary

choose hunter, boy, diplomacy

  • "May you hunt be successful

your

  • your ancestors guide you,"

. instead of , but I noticed this one a lot, so maybe this is just something I dont know about the english language

  • "Yes lady Kanashstatsi, "

"Yes, lady

  • “Mother, even though I’m a boy , can I join men on the hunt ?”

join the men, by the girl option all is fine

  • “Shawatis, will you take one more warrior on you hunting party?”

on your

  • This is Six Nations territory where controlled by other Iroquois tribes

territory which is controlled

  • They want o fight these settlers

to

  • You rush out and waive

wave

  • Just as you begin to fear like you’ve made a major mistake, and Englishman

, an

  • “Are you ok boy?”.

delete the dot

  • The mother thought he just need ed rest

just delete the space, needed

  • the child is in serious pain."

The, also delete the "

  • "My granfather

grandfather

Choose girl and hunting:

  • She then shouts out; Shawatis,

" instead of ;

  • The hunting party is on edge; You

, you

  • While most of the hunting party enjoy eating the swan, Shawatis.

I think there is a part of the sentence missing

  • You run out yelling stop, stop; You kneel

stop, you

  • You learn after that you jumping out in the open

after that, you jumping out in the open,

  • was the chief’s nephew; He had thought

, he

  • Sell furs;

,

  • best price for your furs; European

, european

Choosing boy and Healer and christianity

  • flows though nature

through

  • people of Akwesane; He

, he

  • you tell Father.

maybe: the Father, or: Father Lemieux

  • You had though

thought

  • You will find the Iroquois are a people of honor

are people of honour

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