I liked the demo, I wonder what will we have to do next.
Just two things: it would be easier and more aesthetically pleasing if there were breaks to separate the paragraphs. It was a bit difficult to read when everything was condensed
The creator keeps changing pronouns. Maybe it was intended that way, I just wanted to point it out. During the “thou shalt leave” scene.
Per chance, were you inspired by other works when you wrote it? (I am only asking since I am currently obsessed with a similar-themed anime. Perhaps you’ve heard of it, “Welcome to Demon School Iruma-kun”? Only the part with the ranks, mind you.)
I was influenced by Demon: Recollect. I’ve never heard of “Welcome to Demon School Iruma-Kun”. I’m unaware of any pronouns that keep changing, it would be incredibly helpful if you could point them out specifically. Thanks for the advice!
Im looking forward for what this game has instore for us. Hopefully we can get another chapter or 2
One question. Do we get to leave the estate with money, troops ect?
Money nor Troops will not be available when leaving the estate. However, Chapter 2 [The current ending of the Demo] will give you chances to get Troops.